|
|
|
|
|
Punk rock girl
Author: stHell66
|
| |
(Added on Dec 8, 2006)
(This month 28916 readers) (Total 72225 readers) |
| |
story about a teenage girl getting taken advantage of |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 6 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
17% |
17% |
17% |
0% |
0% |
17% |
33% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
| Average
Rating: (6.5/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (9/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (3/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
chksng19
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jan 29, 2007 |
| |
Stories are supposed to be tools to communicate: if half of the people trying to use the tool don't understand due to grammar, spelling, and all the rest, there is NO communication.
Fairly common ideas, and not many fresh ones. (5/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
SimonMagick
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jan 27, 2007 |
| |
I'm going to pretend the bad grammer and spelling are meant to imitate the way a dumb 14 year old girl might write. With that it mind, it's a gas! It's like something GG Allin might've written in prison. Punk was/is about chaos, imagination, sex and drugs. Good stuff! (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
zorro
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Dec 28, 2006 |
| |
Really like the premise, the imagination. (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
cala
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Dec 9, 2006 |
| |
This author has written better stories. Ok, no more intelligible, but at least they were enjoyably silly....... StHell, spell checker, online dictionaries and thesaurus' - all your friends! (4/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
H Dean
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Dec 8, 2006 |
| |
Unfortunately, I found very little to enjoy in this story. Technically, this story is a train wreck. Furthermore, the ideas are relatively mundane. Combined together, it makes for a completely unenjoyable story. It appears to me that this story was slapped together in one sitting and then submitted to the library. (3/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
NateInPhilly
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Dec 8, 2006 |
| |
Well, first off, you need to realize that the stories are written in first person from the girl's point of view. As a writer, her ability with english is poor at best, but she does a good job of conveying the thoughts of a woman with a less-than-stellar intellect. I personally love her stories and look forward to each one. (9/10)
|
|
|
About 