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The Facility
Author: Facility Director
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(Added on Dec 6, 2006)
(This month 20535 readers) (Total 44231 readers) |
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When a powerful mafia boss is brutally murdered, his daughter is captured by a rival crime syndicate and forced into slavery. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 11, 2008 |
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excellent job, exellent story (9/10)
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chksng19
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Jan 15, 2007 |
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Good telling of the tale. Looking forward to the sequel... (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
finc
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Dec 21, 2006 |
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I think you may have over cooked it with the number of babes and the story may become unweildy? But i do need to know what happens to megan next. Not an origional concept but a great interpritation (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
fantazmaster
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Dec 9, 2006 |
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A very well written and readable story.I especially like how the author has described the characters involved in this first chapter.along with a very well detailed description of the Facility.I hope there will be more chapters forthcoming! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
niftyfree
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Dec 9, 2006 |
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Very well writen story. Better than the generic name led me to expect.
But you put your main victim in a three thousand dollar dress, and then strip her off screen? I'm at least expecting to see the dress again by Act III! (8/10)
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subbaby
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Dec 8, 2006 |
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Loved it, can't wait to see more! (10/10)
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s1xer
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Dec 7, 2006 |
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A very good start, very readable and promises to become even better. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slutsteph
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Dec 6, 2006 |
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It is a good start, with potential for some excellent humiliation and submission scenes. (8/10)
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masterdw
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Dec 6, 2006 |
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Enjoyed it very much. Similiar to my series, Zero-the training of a slave. As you continue the story, I will upgrade the rating if merited. I never give more than an 8 for a first chapter. Good luck. (8/10)
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