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Benjamin
Author: Dee Driscoll
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(Added on Dec 3, 2006)
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This is a violent story about a violent man that contains a violent sexual scene between him and a woman. Out of all I\'ve posted on this website so far, this is the least \'pornographic\' story so far. Bear this in mind and thank you. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Dec 8, 2006 |
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As usual, this author has taken a relatively ordinary venture and resucitated it in fine fashion. From the start, it was clear that this would be a story that would leave it's dirty footprints as it exited the room - a testiment to this author's writing prowess. However, I must note that this story is less carefully crafted than usual. Certain phrasings seemed out of place and not up to his level. There were also more typos than usual; there aren't any typos, usually. In fairness, I think I am rating Dee, an excellent writer, against Dee and not in more general terms. Perhaps it is unfair, but I have come to expect near perfection from him.
Finally, I can't say that I found this story enjoyable - It was unpleasant and brutal. Still, I was drawn through. It was exactly what was promised. It was very well done. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Dec 9, 2006)
- Thank you, Dean, very flattering. I'll have to look into the phrasing bit, though, maybe American urban lingo is not as easy to reconstruct as I seem to think it is. But that's to be expected. On the other hand, I am quite surprised and embarrassed to hear about typos since I wasn't aware of any and I don't even recall my word processor pointing out any. My brain must be slipping... Thank you for the review, very much.
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H Dean
(Edit) (Dec 9, 2006)
- I wouldn't fret it too much, really. We all make those mistakes. Some of them are just never caught by our own eyes. It's a bitch to be your own editor. Regardless, it's a good piece. You just have the misfortune of being reviewed by a picky SOB.
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| Reviewer:
JonMaddux
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Dec 3, 2006 |
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It was exactly as you described it, it obviously wasnt intended to be romantic and thats fine. You wrote it well!! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Dec 4, 2006)
- Thank you, Jon, for the nice words and high grade. Of course this is a romantic story, though, only not in the usual sense.
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