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Training Marie
Author: Imawilburd
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(Added on Nov 11, 2006)
(This month 10736 readers) (Total 24888 readers) |
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when Richard chose to marry, he also chose a pure young women to be able to mold and train into what he desired. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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similar to but yet differentthen other stories like it meaning there are stories like this on the site, but your is diffrent enough to make it enjoyable (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
rilawild
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Nov 12, 2006 |
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A very good start. The characters are good. I think I'd have liked a bit of a build up where Richard meets Marie and sees something submissive about her, but that's OK. I look forward to future chapters.
I'd recommend getting a proof reader. There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
imawilburd
(Edit) (Nov 13, 2006)
- I apreciate the imput, and completly see what your saying, will be doing more stories and will keep in mind a better background for those of you <winks> that like plot and background for stories..as far as a proof reader I have one tho she is being slow on geting it back and wanted to see if anyone was intersted in reading and seeing more written so will be sure to have her check over future chaptres before posting thanks again for the review.
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| Reviewer:
suzy9
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Nov 11, 2006 |
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Great start to this story. I look forward to seeing it progress forward. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Shiraz8860
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Nov 11, 2006 |
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Good start....Hopefully the future chapters will build from here.... (8/10)
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- Replied by:
imawilburd
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2006)
- glad you liked it, and there is more of the story to come.. it had a lot of places to go.
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| Reviewer:
Cagemaster1000
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Nov 11, 2006 |
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Excelent start, a promising story. Keep writting, you surely have what it takes... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
imawilburd
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2006)
- thanks for the encuragement, and future chapters will be comming soon.
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