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Saul
Author: Bewildered Kitten
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(Added on Nov 7, 2006)
(This month 9441 readers) (Total 23268 readers) |
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Sexy female heroine is raped by Saul and his friend at a S and M dress-up party and blackmailed into being Saul\'s slave. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Jan 13, 2007 |
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it was hot for me. the characters were developed beleivably and well, and that is what is needed for me to feel engaged. i look forward to friday night. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
niftyfree
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Nov 15, 2006 |
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Very good story, much better than the generic synopsis indicated. I didn't see any format problems. Will definately read part 2. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lindalooking
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Nov 13, 2006 |
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Would be nice if Bewildered Kitten had taken the time to check her work before posting. It appears she left working notes in the middle of the text and then repeated the begining of the story at the end.
The story itself has great promise, with a good working idea, and decent development.
If Bewildered Kitten fixes the posting, I would be happy to reread and re-rate.
The reposting reads very well. Having already seen some of Friday night (in the first posting), I am really looking forward to part II.
I have edited my rating accordingly. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Nov 13, 2006 |
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Nice lively little story. Yes it's been done before but it's always nice to watch the tease get hers and the blackmail is a nice touch (wonder if it's really needed though) Not sure what all the carping about form and format was about, it seemed fairly well edited to me. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
slutsteph
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Nov 11, 2006 |
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girl realizes that editing is a problem, but the author has awesome power in her writing! girls juices very much! (9/10)
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jip
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Nov 8, 2006 |
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Good story. Nice description of her toughts. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 7, 2006 |
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the story itself was good, butthe spaceing by sentences in the middle and end and paragraphs is TERRIBLE to much open and wasted space (5/10)
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