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Me and my pet
Author: Dcswitch85
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(Added on Oct 7, 2006)
(This month 16493 readers) (Total 36081 readers) |
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A story i wrote about my first pet i had whom i never met |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (3/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Oct 23, 2006 |
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Well the idea of the story was good. The writing well be happy there is no zero rating (1/10)
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Dragon's muse
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Oct 13, 2006 |
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From what i could get through before the migraine set in, the basic premise is good. Perhaps with more polished presentation, more people could finish it. (3/10)
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fidget{LL}
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Oct 8, 2006 |
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It was one big run-on sentence and the poor punctuation totally ruined your story. You need to brush up on your grammar and writing skills. (1/10)
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just_His_annie
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Oct 8, 2006 |
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I think the story had value but due to the lack and improper use of punctuation/capitalization I was unable to read the complete story. (2/10)
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Widget
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Oct 8, 2006 |
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I found the ideas in the story to be good however without proper punctuation and paragraphs it was very difficult for me to read.
I would recommend that you try to see if someone would proof read for you (perhaps your pet?) I look forward to seeing what else you would like to submit. (3/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Oct 7, 2006 |
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Have you never heard of punctuation? (1/10)
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rce
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Oct 7, 2006 |
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I could not get through this story. I don't enjoy reading such a long paragraph. (3/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 7, 2006 |
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the story was 1 long paragrah and you used the "@" way to many times, do not short cut on astory to finish it, (5/10)
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