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Letter from a Slave Girl
Author: Peter de Sade
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(Added on Oct 6, 2006)
(This month 52187 readers) (Total 67647 readers) |
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Debbee had always wanted to be a model and eagerly signed up for Club Model World as a BDSM model. She was nervous when the President told her what she could expect from her first assignment, a Club Showcase evening: it was to be a heavy session of domination and abuse which was to be the first of many such sessions for the young girl. Recovering days later from the painful experience, Debbee wrote this unique letter to the President of Club Model World, begging for mercy from him and asking to be released from her life-long contract. But does she really want her request to be granted? |
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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May 16, 2007 |
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Speaking of confusing, I'm not too sure why the criticism of this story. I found it to be a pretty good representation of the mind state of a (fantasy) teen in an extreme situation, where they are both ashamed of their feelings, yet drawn to a world that they know is dangerous and scary. The technique of the 'letter' worked well, and the language seemed realistic to me (if some of the scenarios didn't). Maybe I'm just getting soft in my old age, but this story worked great for me. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Oct 11, 2006 |
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Confusing story, with the first chapter bouncing around; "free me" then "I love it". Not sensible. Some serious concern about female plumbing here, too. You could plug a pussy forever and still be able to pee... that's a different hole, didn't you know that? Now if they used a catheter, that would be different.
Kind of rough, seems to be light on description of actual occurrances. "This happened, then that happened" doesn't lead itself to an interested reader; rather, this seems to make the story move too fast. (5/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Oct 7, 2006 |
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I liked your notion of writing asking for release while then telling the President of the company what all sexually excited the girl. That being said, I got a bit confused with you added in a letter from the President--was it the original letter written to the girl or an answer to the first part of her letter to him? I think the last chapter or so got a bit boring with the old nazi-type guys. Perhaps the next group to use her will be fun to read. (7/10)
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