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The Horwath RAAC
Author: Sir Thomas
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(Added on Sep 20, 2006)
(This month 33463 readers) (Total 54833 readers) |
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Remedial Attitude Adjustment Center. Training facility for puppy and ponygirls |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
tellmeyourstory
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Apr 26, 2015 |
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Terrific story, well written. Loved the futuristic geopolitical circumstances, the DNA grafting of the tails, and combining two of the most popular types of kink animal play: puppies and ponies. (10/10)
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littleone_
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Oct 31, 2006 |
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One of the best stores in cybrespace. Read this story, especially if you want to feel what the victims are feeling. In short, Sir Thomas you are now this girl most favority autory, you pushed Tom Wolf out of first place. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Sep 21, 2006 |
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Certain factual errors aside, this story was not bad. First, the technical writing aspects were quite sound, allowing for steady story flow. I liked the basic premise, overall, though there was a substantial suspension of reality. I found the ideas in this story to be pretty erotic, overall. Unfortunately, the constant change in prespectives was annoying and hindered my enjoyment of this tale, especially the perspective of the vicitms. The victims seemed to take their treatment with far to little resistance, overly stoic of their circumstance. I do believe this would have been much better had it been presented in first person omnicient. After having read one other tale of yours, I will offer that this was much better and I look forward to more. Hopefully, you can delve a little deeper into truer emotional aspects of your characters. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Sep 21, 2006 |
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Starting an erotic fantasy with real-life events and their ficticeous outcome, is always a walk on very thin ice... Especially when in the first, real-life part, some of the facts aren't right.
The U.S. President doesn't need an invtation to the United Nations, as the U.S. are a permanent member. Neither must the U.S. president be afraid of attending speeches by invited leaders of countries who's politics are not endorsed by the members of the United Nations, as the United Nations are neutral ground.
As a Belgian, I am grateful you didn't drop a bomb on Brussels, even though Brussels harbors the NATO and its tactical wing.
So far, so bad...
The story itsself is OK, but I'm going to have to re-read it, cuz with the blunders in the introduction, I wasn't in the mood to go higher than a fiver.
JJ (5/10)
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mkemse
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Sep 20, 2006 |
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i did find this one more enjoyable then ponyland and by nature i love pnoy girl stories but the way it was put together it id not do as much for me as other have but please keep up the good work (7/10)
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