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Pussycat I
Author: Arnold Puttywn
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(Added on Sep 13, 2006)
(This month 21845 readers) (Total 37564 readers) |
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Asia loves to play the pussycat-this weekend she has to play a little harder than she had imagined. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Oct 18, 2006 |
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Really great work, incredibly imaginative and wonderful characters. The only thing I really didn't like was the review; it would work from multiple character perspectives, but the omniscient view didn't do anything that wasn't accomplished with the character views. (9/10)
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t.shirt
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Sep 17, 2006 |
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Well done. VERY SEXY AND HOT. Brilliant take on humiliation with the food bowl and watching while she's using the tray. Some unique ideas in this story and looking forward to reading part two. Ideal length for part one as well, not too long and not too short. I can imagine this as a movie with the way it was presented. Who wouldnt want a pussycat after reading this? And I'm a dog person! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dundee
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Sep 16, 2006 |
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I've read a few other stories in order to reduce bias but this really stands out. The story line, the vivid detailed descriptions (so many other stories seem to be lacking in this) and the hint that there are going to be more twists and turns. Such a fercious and caring pussy cat she is. And I already distrust Janice and her lover. If part 2 is anything like part 1, I'd say this could be published, I'd buy it in book form. Makes for excellent reading and it sent my imagination racing, and it still is. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
pttwyn
(Edit) (Sep 16, 2006)
- Thank You. Not only is Janice to be watched but her exec. assistant Elaine should not be trusted either.
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| Reviewer:
Confessor_Ed
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Sep 14, 2006 |
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An excellent story. I printed it out and read it several times during my break. This is the first time I have written a review and I'm glad it was for such a well written story with such great characters. Also, the twin-dialogue, attention to detail and timing style makes this a winner. Top marks. Part 2, bring it on! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
pttwyn
(Edit) (Sep 14, 2006)
- Thank You for reading our story. Part 2 is progressing well.
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| Reviewer:
Rabbit1
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Sep 14, 2006 |
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Well done ---waiting for part 2 (9/10)
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- Replied by:
pttwyn
(Edit) (Sep 14, 2006)
- Thank You, I am honored..
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| Reviewer:
she_screams
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Sep 14, 2006 |
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I cant wait for the next part! I can't find the error about her weight coz I think that's Janice's weight mentioned first. I enjoyed you wrote Asia's side of it cause some stories are poor and only give male side of things going on. You're dead good with descibing things so I felt I was there. I wish! Great writing and a great story. Women and men will love this! (10/10)
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chksng19
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Sep 14, 2006 |
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This is an absolutely marvelous story; a wonderful premise and a grand telling. A tiny error here and there (like the first listing of her weight...) are forgotten in eagerness to read on.
Can't wait for more! (10/10)
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