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The Brat
Author: SFCityDom
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(Added on Sep 10, 2006)
(This month 17927 readers) (Total 49092 readers) |
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Sometimes it is tough being a daddy. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
kleintje15
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Dec 8, 2007 |
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like it, but i would like to know how they met etc. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 28, 2007 |
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all of your stories are outstanding (10/10)
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Reviewer:
t.shirt
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Sep 17, 2006 |
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Really good writing and characters but I wanted it to be longer! I recommend this story but it is too short but it is very good! (8/10)
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Reviewer:
His_little one
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Sep 16, 2006 |
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You're an amazing writer. I love that your stories are down to earth and realistic. I just wish they were longer (9/10)
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schoolboylv
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Sep 14, 2006 |
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Very good story. I think I've read this story in an earlier form on another site. I like the changes you made. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
sunburststrat
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Sep 13, 2006 |
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I really liked this one, especially the relationship stuff at the end. We could use more of that. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
25toLife
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Sep 11, 2006 |
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This is among the best short stories I've read so far. The only reason I didn't give a 10 is because it's too short... (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Millie
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Sep 11, 2006 |
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Very nice. Enjoyed the interactions and the classy way it was written. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
pttwyn
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Sep 11, 2006 |
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Very nice, I got mad at her too. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
J's blu
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Sep 10, 2006 |
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thank You once again SIr. You have the knack of making characters come to life vividly within such a short space, and they are all so delicious. i suspect that is the secret, Your stories are character driven, the scenes are a natural extension of their interaction. (9/10)
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