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Vae Damnati
Author: C. Aelius
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(Added on Aug 27, 2006)
(This month 18528 readers) (Total 33427 readers) |
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Violence, sadism and love in a world secretly inhabited by an immortal race of Vampires. Spans the entire scope of BDSM from romantic scenes by lovers, all the way to sadistic domination of unwilling slaves. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
PoppetToday
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Oct 16, 2006 |
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This is a great story. I read it when it first came out, and today since I haven't seen any updates I went back and searched for it again. Please write me, I am dying to know what happens. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
adeadeasyone
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Sep 1, 2006 |
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Intriguing beginning...will look for future chapters. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Aug 27, 2006 |
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Where to begin? OK. Many, many wrong words (to alleviate means to make better or easier, not to piss, for example). Disagreement between subject and predicate in many sentences makes them difficult to understand. Some silly remarks: a Domme has a unique scent?
A good editor could work wonders with the story. Try rereading it several times seperated by a day or more to catch more of your own errors.
There is the germ of an idea here; work at communicating it more effectively. (5/10)
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