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Coalton Correctional Facility
Author: Jay S. Miles
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(Added on Aug 25, 2006)
(This month 16238 readers) (Total 34103 readers) |
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Two teenage girls are sent to a disciplinary correctional facility set in the mountains of W. Virginia. There they learn how to behave, obey, respect, and please those who are in authority over them. Some lessons are easy, and some lessons are hard. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Aug 27, 2006 |
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A pretty good tale, with lots of possibilities. Suggest you check on dialect terminology before using it. (8/10)
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Msgoodeatsdiner
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Aug 26, 2006 |
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Loved this story! wish there was a place like that for this 31 year old to be sent to! (9/10)
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chattel69
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Aug 26, 2006 |
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I was enjoying the story until it got to the end and the format changed. I look forward to the coming chapters as we have 5 years of training and discipline to read about. (7/10)
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barbod
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Aug 26, 2006 |
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Thoroughly enjoyable read. The problem with the formatting was a bit annoying but still a good story. Hope part 2 is coming up soon (8/10)
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Good_Grip
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Aug 25, 2006 |
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Good story. It's well written. I'll be interested to see what happens next. You might check with the site owner about what happened to the formatting. Also, you should run a spell check. There were a few misspelled words, but it didn't detract from the story. (8/10)
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Lee Boudine
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Aug 25, 2006 |
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A sweet little story of devience foisted upon a deviant girl. I prefer mature subjects who are better able to resist . Young girls and boys are not turn ons for me. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
jsmiles3000
(Edit) (Aug 25, 2006)
- Your vote should be a reflection of the quality and professionalism of the story, not your personal turn-ons or kinks. Voting is not about you, it is about this story, and poor comments aren't a turn-on for anyone. If this isn't your kind of story, then stick with your mature themes, and don't vote.
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