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Owning PIta Author: Joe Wilson, Pita Wilson
(Added on Aug 22, 2006) (This month 9131 readers) (Total 17417 readers)
Is this the first chapter of a BDSM Romance? "Touching Down" describes Joe and Pita's first day together, their fantasies, their plane ride (!), and forecasts "What Will Be" for them.

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Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
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Reviewer: Rabbit1 (Edit) Rating: Sep 3, 2006
Very enjoyable reading ---I do not get much time to review stories but I had to take the time to say well done ---- (9/10)
Replied by: her_Joe (Edit) (Sep 3, 2006)
Thank you for the support and interest, Rabbit, especially given the crunch of time ... it is appreciated. hJ

Reviewer: Mistress M (Edit) Rating: Sep 2, 2006
I, uh, really liked this story. (9/10)

Reviewer: His_pita (Edit) Rating: Aug 25, 2006
I am so proud and happy for you. I have loved this story since I first read the rough draft and it's so nice to see others responding so well to it. I just know they will love the next chapters as much. Way to go Sir!! (10/10)

Reviewer: Sweep (Edit) Rating: Aug 25, 2006
Hi,
I really enjoyed your story. I really appreciate it when the female character has an identifiable personality and one can see her acceptance of BDSM in a very real way. It is what goes on in her head that is far more enjoyable and erotic than the physical events - exciting those descriptions may be. Sadly in many stories the woman is pretty single dimensional. I'd have rated you a 10 if the story had been longer. (9/10)
Replied by: her_Joe (Edit) (Aug 25, 2006)
Stay tuned, Sweep! Chapter 2 is coming -- when it's done, there should be 8 chapters. And thanks for the great feedback! Joe

Reviewer: schoolboylv (Edit) Rating: Aug 25, 2006
Good Start, It is a little bit wordy at times. You don't need so much first person dialog. I'll re-review after the next chapter.... (7/10)
Replied by: her_Joe (Edit) (Aug 25, 2006)
Thanks for reading, schoolboylv! I appreciate the input.
Not really sure what "first person dialog" is as it's all in limited third pov. Want to explain, please?

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