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A Slave To Politics
Author: SpeechMasterOne
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(Added on Aug 25, 2001)
(This month 171952 readers) (Total 346289 readers) |
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A Deputy Mayor finds she becomes a sex toy to a sexy young intern. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
tedrange
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Dec 8, 2011 |
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Great edging (10/10)
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Voracious Reader
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Dec 14, 2007 |
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One of my favorites, especially the "surprise" at the "spa!". Hope for more chapters, eventually.
I really liked the reference to Thumb's story at the end, too. Nicely done! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Isignedupforthis
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Oct 8, 2006 |
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Your story has a mediocre appeal at best. The grammar and spelling is appaling at times and ruins the moments you try to create. Spell checking, proof-reading and an editor are my suggestions. You also have a tendancy to recreate scenes, such as the 'first' time Allicia recieves a collar, that happens twice. This kind of thing happens OFTEN. I read your story from start to finish and frankly, I wish I hadn't. You may want to buy a theasaurus, and be more creative in your paraphrasing. All in all I give it a four out of ten and that's being gracious. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Dec 6, 2006)
- Since your nick is "isignedupforthis" and you only had one review, being this one here, I could deduct that your sole purpose was to try and drag this author through the mud...
Well, you failed.
Your review is mediocre and reminds me of grumpy schoolmaster types who see some real writing skills, but instead of giving praise they tear down the writer and his product to compensate for the fact that they themselves are totally inept in a field where they would have so much liked to excell...
JJ
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JimmyJump
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Apr 5, 2006 |
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A real scorcher, this one...
Though the beginning is a tad awkward, once the subjugation of Alicia starts-off, we're on a rollercoaster ride that touches the whole gamma of the BDSM world.
Especially Alicia's peril as she's being kept on the brink of pleasure, is exquisitely delicious.
The scene at City Hall, near the end, is simply mind-boggling...
Thank you very much for this most excellent contribution, SpeechMasterOne.
JJ (10/10)
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Brabazon
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Jul 23, 2005 |
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Splendid, I wish that there was more of this. The last chapters are among the best. (10/10)
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MrVortex
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Nov 2, 2004 |
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This was the first story I read from here and I have to tell you the orgasm control etc in this story is awesome.. I have applied it and it does wonders.. Thanks so much for the story and a nice first impression. (9/10)
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Brooking
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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Very hot story:) (8/10)
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sunburststrat
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Sep 9, 2004 |
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Great story! One of my favorites. I especially enjoy when an author can get into the psychological stuff, humiliation, etc., without resorting to extreme violence. This was an erotic masterpiece. The intern was sexy, the deputy mayor even sexier. And forcing Alicia (through pure need) to acquire the ability to eat herself was pure genius! Now that was strong imagery!
My only complaint - I want more! (10/10)
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Abe Froman
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Aug 30, 2004 |
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To me, this is the be-all and end-all of blackmail/humiliation stories. Very hot, very detailed, and I very much want to read more and more of her predicament. (10/10)
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quixote327
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Jul 15, 2004 |
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Excellent. The teasing was great. I would love more group scenes and more slaves. (9/10)
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Wmnwholves
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May 5, 2004 |
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Well written story... It flow is good, and I hope that you do continue this story... It is at a very critical point in my opinion. Keep up the good work. (9/10)
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Luzifer
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Oct 25, 2003 |
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one of the best I've ever come across
longing for further parts
REALLY GREAT STUFF!! (10/10)
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OneHotThing4All
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Sep 28, 2003 |
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One of my all time faves on the site. The possibilities for public humiliation -- forced to cum in a very public setting, etc. -- are endless. A turnabout or revenge story with the same characters also has possibilities... Well done with great possibilities for more! Keep going! (9/10)
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mkemse
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Sep 26, 2003 |
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Good but getting to long (9/10)
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Satan_Klaus
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Sep 25, 2003 |
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A very good story of humiliation and sexual denial .
It stands out from the mass.
Only point of critique is the frequent change of narrative time. It makes it a little less smooth to read. (8/10)
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S_Couture
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Sep 22, 2003 |
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Continues to be one of the best series. My biggest complaint is the time between posts. That's being very unfair to me. I am not the deputy mayor you know. (10/10)
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knotz2u
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Sep 22, 2003 |
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Very erotic, extremely well written. (9/10)
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mmm
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Sep 20, 2003 |
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enough now..u r stealing from other stories..the attraction of deputy mayor slave is over! (1/10)
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- Replied by:
SpeechMastr
(Edit) (Sep 21, 2003)
- How is it the the only 3 ratings that mmm has provided this community have all been 1/10? I enjoy well constructed critism, even for those who do not enjoy what I do. But mmm has decided violate the trust of this community with an uncourageous and thoughtless act.
I have a challenge for mmm. Write a story. Let us all enjoy your creative fruits and the POSITIVE contribution to this online forum.
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S_Couture
(Edit) (Sep 22, 2003)
- Don't be a hater mmm.
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sunburststrat
(Edit) (Sep 27, 2004)
- I agree with the others. This is an outrageously low score for a story that many consider among the best, if not THE best on this site. This may be the only 10 I've given. Does the low ball score get thrown out, like with biased Olympic judges? I don't even think it should be allowed to be posted if it's this far from the consensus. Obviously, something's wrong here.
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jbowler65
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Sep 2, 2003 |
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We enjoyed this story quite a bit, especially the public humiliations and the orgasm denial. Well written. Hopefully it will be continued to the conclusion. (9/10)
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tttttt
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Aug 20, 2003 |
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too long....get her pregnant if possible (6/10)
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Curtis
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Apr 30, 2003 |
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An excellent story. The only problem I had with it was that I thought it should have ended with the previous chapter (12) and this should have been the beginning of a new story with the same characters, since the storyline no longer deals with the office of the assistant mayor. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
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Apr 24, 2003 |
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Bit long and sluggish for my taste - despite diving in at the jugular with the unsubtle descriptive stuff from early on, it doesn't really get going very quickly. Ideas are good enough if that's your kind of thing (which they often are, judging by the other ratings) (6/10)
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alphie712fr
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Apr 23, 2003 |
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very good story indeed , i loved it from start to end (9/10)
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Anna
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Dec 17, 2002 |
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GREAT STORY (9/10)
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kay
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Dec 14, 2002 |
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a tantalizing story from beginning to end! i particularily enjoyed the slow, methodical development of the characters; it made to outcome and the progressive degradation so much more captivating. more, please! (10/10)
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gigerbond
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Nov 28, 2002 |
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yes excellent, love it ! (10/10)
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tomalmorf
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Sep 1, 2002 |
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Excellent idea parsee!!! Thought it dragged its heels at the outset and then again in the middle.Maybe a touch more resistance or reluctant lady mayoress would have helped fill the gap. All things considered tho an excellent attempt look forward to more from this author 10/10 (7/10)
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hyphen666
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Jan 22, 2002 |
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Since I don't like to review incomplete works, I've refrained from any comments on this one. Now is the time, and I can do nothing but agree with the reviewers that have gone before me. This one reminds me a bit of the Teri Madison story, Second Place, and that's high praise, believe me. (9/10)
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texswim
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Jan 16, 2002 |
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Really enjoy this story. Hope there are more chapters. (10/10)
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kokkentor
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Dec 21, 2001 |
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I like this story more and more, and i hope there is more than until now 7 chapter.. :-) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bmaster
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Dec 11, 2001 |
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Well told and fascinating story, but also a bit to long. (9/10)
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Jacen
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Oct 24, 2001 |
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Nice, indeed. I always enjoy the stories that attempt to get inside the minds of the victims and or dominants. Spelling and grammar are superb as well, and the creativity is high. I will look foward to the next part/s. (8/10)
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guidama
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Oct 22, 2001 |
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excellent: basically the best kind of plot ... the descent into sexual slavery where initial non-consensuality is overwhelmed by a deep internal desire to be enslaved. Hope to read more of humiliations as well as some interesting tortures. (9/10)
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DOM68005
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Oct 22, 2001 |
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Several intersting twists. Surprise ending. Could stay as is or be expanded at the aurthor's discression.
MORE MORE MORE !!
Will the arthor write somethiing to the effect that victim turns the tables? I Hope !! (9/10)
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engineer
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Oct 21, 2001 |
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Very good! Nice basic plot, very interesting ideas, well-written. Want to see more! (9/10)
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buzzgok
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Oct 16, 2001 |
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Loved the idea of going shopping while barely covering anything up. Can't wait til the next chapter is added. (8/10)
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beta
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Sep 3, 2001 |
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Terrific story. Good writing. I loved the humiliation theme mixed with orgasm denial. (9/10)
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drifter
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Aug 27, 2001 |
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This is a great story that will get any bondage enthusiasits would enjoy (8/10)
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Rbjr17
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Aug 26, 2001 |
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Truly loved the "turncoat" angle. Truly loved the deputy mayor's submissive tendencies. And particularly enjoyed her humiliation at having to fuck the dildo against the window. (9/10)
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