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My Dutch pet
Author: willowblonde
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(Added on Aug 8, 2006)
(This month 140158 readers) (Total 257293 readers) |
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A Dutch sailor starts off on a six month trip to the Caribbean as a free man looking for no strings sex whenever possible along the way and ends his trip in England the slave of a former lover. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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great job (9/10)
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Princess Xandra
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Apr 20, 2008 |
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Hi. I came across this story and was totally spell bound by it. Can't wait till the next chapter. Part of me wants to see a happy ending quickly, but part of me wants to know what other things Chrissie thinks up. Well done! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
willowblonde
(Edit) (Apr 25, 2008)
- I'm pleased it's still entertaining after so many chapters. There are quite a few chapters still to go, as we get to see what Tracey has been up to while Roy has been 'enjoying' himself with Chrissie. I do already have an idea for an ending and if I go with it,it means one of them will have a happy ending while the other won't. As for Chrissie, I think the saying 'what goes around comes around' fits her nicely!!
But of course between my idea now and when the time comes to write it I might write something completely different!
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| Reviewer:
jrscandles
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Dec 6, 2007 |
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If you likeded "Exit to Eden" you should enjoy this story. Keeps you interested and wanting more. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
willowblonde
(Edit) (Dec 15, 2007)
- Thanks for the review. It's really difficult to keep the story interesting when writing lots of chapters so I'm pleased that people are still reading it and aren't bored with it yet. Sending Roy off to become the property of Chrissie wasn't my original intention as I planned to end the story several chapters ago but Roy wanted me to continue with it so I had to take it in a different direction. After all there's only so long it could have gone on for before they declared their love for each other!
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| Reviewer:
helga2005
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Jun 20, 2007 |
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I love the story. I like chapter to read. (10/10)
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Sandcastler
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Mar 21, 2007 |
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This review comes after reading chapter 16. I understand there are many chapters yet to come. In my opinion, the story behind the story seems to be at least as interesting as the tale itself. The author is clearly a very articulate woman with a creative mind and a rich imagination. In writing 'my dutch pet' she has woven a fantasy world around two real-life people, herself and the man she loves, and she is using the fantasy story in order to make him want to become her slave in real life. Judging from how many chapters she has written so far, and how many more chapters she plans on writing, her plan to seduce him into real life sexual slavery with words seems to be working rather well. I hope that after willow blond has finished this novel, and after she and her thrall have been together for a while in real life, that she will write another story for us all to enjoy, about how this fantasy tale set the stage for their real life D/s love affair. (10/10)
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tltslv
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Jan 23, 2007 |
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The author of this story is truly talented. Almost any writer can describe sexual activities; where Willow Blonde distinguishes herself is in capturing and sharing with her readers the emotional feelings and motivations of the primary characters. i have become interested in, and caring about the outcome of this story for, both the Mistress and the slave.
That observation should not be taken to infer that the author has limited talented in detailing erotic scenes. To the contrary, her descriptions are among the hottest (and kinkiest), i have ever had the pleasure of reading. Clearly, no act of D/s is taboo for Willow Blonde!
In summary, this is not just a great read. It is a FemmeDomme/male sub classic. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
AustinFan4Life
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2007)
- it was a great story....but I didn't get a change to read chapter 16 & when I revisited the site it said that the storyline doesn't exist.
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| Reviewer:
loserslave01
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Jan 21, 2007 |
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Wonderful story, with every chapter it grows better. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
willowblonde
(Edit) (Jan 22, 2007)
- Thanks for the review. I hope that you continue to enjoy the remaining chapters.
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| Reviewer:
kelbai
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Jan 21, 2007 |
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Back in September last year, after reading chapter #4, i wrote to you of my concerns of the outcome of that chapter. Although i knew any suggestions and concerns were entirely irrelevant because your Dutch friend had already written your story, i expressed my thoughts anyway. As an incurable romantic i had hoped for a happy ending. i looked upon the story as "girl meets boy", "girl looses boy" and finally "girl gets boy back" (at least i had hoped it would end that way).
How simplistic of me to categorize your story that way. Your story has turned out to be a love story all right but on the highest of all plains, unconditional love. i am so glad that your story had been written and could not be tampered by the likes of a ditz critic like me.
i am speechless as to how moving this story has been. Your characters depth of feelings and emotions detailed has made the story so human and brought me into your story. Being able to see all points of view has made this story so realistic. i am very much hooked and still don't know how it will end – it has been that suspenseful for me.
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
willowblonde
(Edit) (Jan 22, 2007)
- Hi kelbai
I do remember you writing to me and I had indeed at that point written upto ch17. I'm really pleased that you are still enjoying the story and can only say thankyou very much for your compliments. I know the story is in no way perfect but if it is enjoyed by its readers then I know that I am doing ok! I write about the emotions of both involved because the story is about two real people - Roy and myself and the emotions, thoughts and actions are based on our own personalities. It's also how I imagine we would be with each other if the situation really happened.
I have now written ch21 and there is still more to come, although I suppose at some point I will have to end it but as yet I don't even know myself how it will end. But I will bear in mind your desire for a happy ending!
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azrlg17
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Oct 8, 2006 |
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Nice story, the sex is hot.
But I don't like a mistress who is not strong enough to break her slave.
And I don't like a slave who has opportunity after opportunity to flee and does not. Even in an alternate universe where slavery is legal I highly doubt that the military would ever sell their own people. So all the slave has to do is get back to an embassy and he would be free.
I'm also not a believer in unremovable collars.
The "I - you" perspective takes some getting used to.
And two erroneous details:
If you pinch someones nose to make him/her open her mouth they will pull back their lips and happily breathe through their teeth. Getting a gag in someones mouth that way simply does not work.
In the beginning he could not get his dick up because he desperately needed a piss? That normally gets the dick up without any arousal. Ever heard of morning wood?
(6/10)
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- Replied by:
willowblonde
(Edit) (Oct 8, 2006)
- Thanks for taking the time to review the story.
The beginning of the story does not go into the history that they both had together before he became her slave but as the story was written for the guy who it is about no explanation was needed when writing it for him. It is the emotional history they have together though that stops him making a complete break for freedom. She makes mistakes as his Mistress because she is not dominant by nature and she bought him on impulse, not really having any idea what she was supposed to do with him in his new role. Therefore she sometimes acts as she believes a real Mistress would and sometimes lapses from that role when she feels the stirrings of the remainder of the love that she once had for him.
The people in the military who arranged his kidnap were doing it purely for personal gain and not as part of their job. They kidnapped military guys purely because they were in the position of being able to make them disappear without awkward questions being asked.
Re your last two points. I have never practised the lifestyle for real so a lot of what is written is pure guesswork and imagination.
Being a woman I have never experienced 'morning wood' (incidentally I hadn't heard of it before)so didn't know that!
I'm not a professional writer and don't have the opportunity to research the things that I write about so unfortunately the story will remain guesswork for some of the things that he goes through. I hope it doesn't spoil the story too much for you.
Willow
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| Reviewer:
TheDevilsPlaymate
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Sep 4, 2006 |
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this story turns me on majorly. I love it! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dushi
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Aug 15, 2006 |
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It was very nice and excited to read this story.., I couldnt stop while reading it and I am very curious to the next chapters !!
I wish I was "him".. !!!! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
willowblonde
(Edit) (Aug 15, 2006)
- Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like the story. Chapter 2 should be on the site shortly. I think my pet is becoming a bit concerned at the number of guys who want to swap places with him!
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Aug 10, 2006 |
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Very good, very enjoyable. I am delighted that you have seventeen chapters! I hope you will share more of them with us. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
willowblonde
(Edit) (Aug 11, 2006)
- The second one is on its way!
- Replied by:
Millie
(Edit) (Aug 20, 2006)
- I enjoyed the second chapter as well. I can't edit my review for some reason so thought to do this instead. More please.
- Replied by:
Millie
(Edit) (Sep 10, 2006)
- I love the twise you have left us with now. This is a great story.
- Replied by:
willowblonde
(Edit) (Sep 20, 2006)
- Hi Millie, thanks for continuing to review the story. I'm glad you like the twist in Ch5.I was a bit worried it wouldn't go down well with some readers, but I do take control again! I'm currently writing Ch19 so there's plenty more to come.
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Millie
(Edit) (Sep 20, 2006)
- I am still enjoying this. I think there was a bit of artistic license in this chapter. The lady in our chemist isn't nearly so up front! Love the news of lots more chapters to come.
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Millie
(Edit) (Sep 27, 2006)
- This chapter was the best yet, and this story is getting better and better all the time. I don't know how to increase my rating but this is a definite 9/10 now.
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willowblonde
(Edit) (Oct 2, 2006)
- Thanks Millie. I think you will enjoy the next couple of chapters just as much as Roy has an interesting time at the auction house.
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Millie
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2006)
- This was a very good chapter, and set the scene very nicely for what is to come.
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| Reviewer:
Lady`Sapphire
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Aug 9, 2006 |
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Very well written, and the motivations of the characters are quite good. The use of "you" and "I" is a bit distracting, but understandable considering the form of the story, that being, written for someone in particular. I hope that you choose to share more. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
willowblonde
(Edit) (Aug 11, 2006)
- I agree that it is distracting to use 'you' and 'I' throughout the story but when you are writing specifically for someone they don't really want to read about themselves in the 'third person'. I am editing the other chapters to try and add more dialogue to overcome some of it so I hope you will find the rest more enjoyable and easier reading.
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Wistan
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Aug 9, 2006 |
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Good story overall, lots of interesting things going on and the author works to show you how the characters are reacting and feeling. There's no dialogue, which is a shame. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
willowblonde
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2006)
- Hi this started off as a short fantasy written for the dutch guy it is about and I have had no experience of writing this sort of stuff before. I did find it difficult constantly writing 'I' and 'you' so after reading other writing styles and then expanding the story into many chapters I tried to change the way it is written and also to include more dialogue in later chapters.
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| Reviewer:
dteve3
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Aug 9, 2006 |
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Great story,can't wait for the remaining chapters (10/10)
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- Replied by:
willowblonde
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2006)
- Thanks for taking the time to review the story. I'm glad you liked it and hope that you will enjoy the remaining chapters. I am still writing it and the style does change a bit along the way as I've said in the other review but my pet still enjoys reading it so it must be ok!
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