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Brutal Cousin
Author: Joe@
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(Added on Aug 1, 2006)
(This month 85385 readers) (Total 104005 readers) |
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Young boy raped and beaten by older cousin |
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Average (?):  (3/10) |
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| Reviewer:
schechterblue
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Sep 23, 2006 |
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This is kind of hard to read, you need to use some punctuation and follow some basic grammar rules. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Tanya Simmonds
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Aug 14, 2006 |
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It is very difficult to rate this entry. I fail to see much BDSM in it and it is incredibly short. If I could catagorize it, it would be as follows: a homosexual domination fantasy letter in the letters page of a gay magazine. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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What can I say more as the other reviewers!
Wait at least that you have a few chapters (paragraphs!) before you post it! (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Aug 2, 2006 |
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You need to read some of the stories on here with a high rating. Learn from them what is needed to write a good first installment and then have another go at this. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Aug 1, 2006 |
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One paragraph does not a short story make! (2/10)
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