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Virtual Master
Author: DrPain
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(Added on Jul 27, 2006)
(This month 34579 readers) (Total 59615 readers) |
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Steffi is an accomplished professional, when she makes a big mistake. And before long, she finds herself debased and humiliated in the worst way. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JGoddard
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Dec 6, 2014 |
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<br /><b>Warning</b>: Function eregi_replace() is deprecated in <b>/home/bdsmlibr/public_html/stories/review_add.php</b> on line <b>40</b><br />I find the virtual slavery very erotic. I hope you consider continuing this story. (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 28, 2009 |
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Once again, we are confronted with a blackmail set-up that holds no ground.
For starters, Steffi is ambitious, yes, but she's also smart. So, it seems highly unlikely that she would break the ethics rule regarding sleeping with potential clients, because the risk is too high.
Secondly, a blackmailer can shoot as many pics as he wants, if he cannot prove when they were taken (before or after the guy became a client), there's no threat and thus no possibility to blackmail.
This being said, I must admit that the whole set-up with the VM is a great, malicious idea and very well thought-out.
Such a pity then, that the tale never got beyond the first, deliciously promising chapter.
JJ (9/10)
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kinkston
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Jan 15, 2007 |
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Ingenious, imaginative and hot. Steffi is selfish enough that you enjoy her humiliation, but still likable enough to be engaging. (9/10)
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iggygor
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Dec 9, 2006 |
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Interesting approach...well-developed character...good sense of main character's mental state as the story progresses.
Looking forward to more soon. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
iggygor
(Edit) (Dec 9, 2006)
- Finally was able to correct my rating from the accidental low entry to the correct "nine".
Now, where are updates to this story? We've been looking forward to more for quite a while!
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Parker
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Aug 5, 2006 |
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Great start. I can't wait to see more. (9/10)
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GwaiLo
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Aug 5, 2006 |
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I really enjoyed this, I can't wait to read more chapters of this :) (9/10)
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Myya
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Aug 3, 2006 |
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One of the best I read in a long time, can't wait to read more! (9/10)
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slvWriting
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Aug 2, 2006 |
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I use the program described here often and to find a story about it was very exciting. Even more exciting whas reading it and realizing it was so well written and developing a very nice plot and character building.
Keep it up!! I'm anxiously looking forward to read a second chapter soon! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Satan_Klaus
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Jul 30, 2006 |
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Very original writing that leaves the reader stunned waiting for more.
(9/10)
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submit63
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Jul 30, 2006 |
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excellent story, original plot. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters SOON! (10/10) (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ellysub
(Edit) (Jul 31, 2006)
- It is a really good story, very exciting idea, am looking forward to more, thankyou
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| Reviewer:
phantasy_seeker
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Jul 28, 2006 |
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Please keep 'em coming, one of the most original I've ever seen. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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amazingly orignal, i truely love the way you set up the story and can't wait to read more (9/10)
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Millie
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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Very nice. An original story which is easy to read and enjoyable as well. I hope there will be more soon. (9/10)
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