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Tales of Anna (A)
Author: DarkMatter
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(Added on Jul 26, 2006)
(This month 11081 readers) (Total 20868 readers) |
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Man meets woman, and they decide to team up for some kinky (and painful) sex. There is an excuse of a plot wrapped around it like a tiny loincloth. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
MISTRESS H
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Jan 23, 2008 |
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Well written with a relaxed style of a polished author. The plot was well defined and moved onward with each patagraph. Keep up with the loose style, as it will appeal to many readers. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
limecoconut123
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Nov 21, 2007 |
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Good story, enjoyed the humor and the sex. I woudl have liked some more description of the acts, it felt like it all went by so fast. Perhaps it was due to your fast writing style... (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
MasterMatt
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Jul 31, 2006 |
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Good story. I'm not one for long reviews. Spelling is a little off, nothing spellcheck could fix. Nice job. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Jul 30, 2006 |
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this story was great! fast paced action, wonderful sense of humour! and yes You could have used more descriptive passages, but for a quick read, (which is sometimes all i have time for) it was wonderful.also, i feel more description would have ruined the pace. it has the feel of one of those stories blokes tell when they are discussing things of Manly Import. it was written in a different style than the usual,and with wit. write on i say.
respectfully blu (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Polecat
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Jul 30, 2006 |
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Very good story. I enjoyed it, your sense of humor, and the fast forwarding technique.
There are a couple of errors that spell check did not pick up, but that is hard to avoid, unless you have someone to proof read it for you; (Yeah, right!)
I hope you write more. (8/10)
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Millie
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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For a first story this was very good. It kept my interest throughout and the humour in it was great. I agree with the previous reviewer who mentioned that you seemed to be enjoying yourself. I thought that too.
As this is your first story and you did ask for comments I hope you don't mind me saying that I would have liked some speech from Anna while she was being 'played with'. You said she moaned or gave little cries, She wasn't gagged the entire time though and her comments would have enhanced the story for me.
I hope you have caught the writing bug and will continue.
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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Let's be more specific, shall we? I really like the devices you used for 'fast-forwarding' over the non-essential parts, though I do think that technique could easily become overused. Second, I like your attitude. You certainly appeared to be enjoying yourself enormously, whether you actually were or not. i'm glad you gave me the oppourtunity to refute the twit who reviewed another story I read tonight who said that the new authors always get savaged. They don't if they do a good job, which you did.
(By the way, she's 5'5", for those of us who still use English measurement. I would never complain about an author's decision to use whatever system of measurement they felt most comfortable with — I vary mine depending upon the nationality of whoever is narrating the story — but I know a lot of high school dropout Americans will be turned off if they can't understand what you mean about her height, so I'm providing this datum as a public service to them.) (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 26, 2006 |
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was ok, but nothing spectacular (7/10)
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