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Training Allie
Author: Les Evans
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(Added on Jul 19, 2006)
(This month 35490 readers) (Total 76581 readers) |
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The seduction of a highschool girl by her stepfather, cluminating in her voluntary enslavement. In Part 2, her submission deepens, and she recruits another girl to help serve her master. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Aug 9, 2006 |
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enjoyable tale focusing on the mental aspects of their developing relationship which kind of starts out slow and builds up. (9/10)
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La Toya
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Jul 30, 2006 |
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A very well writen story. Except for the male Dom. This story is kind of close to my life with my step-daughter.
You should keep going with this story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Illuminatus
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Jul 26, 2006 |
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Very, very good. I don’t often find something that touches or unsettles me as this story did; for me at least a tale as dark as this is not fun to read, but this is a powerfully profound and accurate exploration of it’s central theme: “why would any woman consent to persist in a relationship that, by any standard, would be considered abusive?” This story was challenging and almost cathartic in its capacity to make the reader feel for and with Allie, the protagonist, and I am grateful for the opportunity to have read it, although I would caution readers that it is a much more serious tale that much of the (merely?) titillating material on BDSM Library. I would strongly recommend it to anyone looking for something substantive and thought provoking. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lindalooking
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Jul 26, 2006 |
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Excellent work developing our poor slave, and really job explaining the who and how she is becoming who she is becoming.
Would love to see more stories please! (8/10)
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funorsun
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Jul 25, 2006 |
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Part I is one of the better pieces I have read for a while, although I feel like Evans rushed part II as it is not quite up to the standards of part I. Part of the reason is I do not like the format used in part II, so readers should take that into consideration.
Overall, a great story line, really good ideas presented, and Evan does a nice job walking the reader thorough the journey. (8/10)
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geoff
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Jul 20, 2006 |
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Very well done. A pleasure to read even though I agree with Carrie Anne on the formatting and that cost a point. (8/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Jul 19, 2006 |
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I think your idea was good, but the odd formatting made it impossible to read to completion! I am not sure if that is how you submitted the story or if the site screwed it up--either way, it needs to be repaired! (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Les Evans
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2006)
- CarrieAnne,
Sorry about the formatting. It was my first post to this site, and it turns out that the standard format for Usenet posting gives the results you see. Anyhow, I resubmitted and the formatting seems to be fixed now.
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| Reviewer:
crackrat
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Jul 19, 2006 |
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This story was fantastic! Allie's growth as a slavergirl was amazing. Very well written. (9/10)
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