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Night crawling
Author: Dee Driscoll
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(Added on Jul 5, 2006)
(This month 10218 readers) (Total 21032 readers) |
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A short, generic, very much cliched wham-bam-thank-you-ma\'am story about a woman being raped in her bed by a total stranger. No character development, no plot, no hidden agendas, no nudge-nudge-wink-wink stuff. Just old fashioned stupid generic hardcore NC porn. By popular demand!!! |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jul 5, 2006 |
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I think you did an excellent job portraying the horror of a real rape!!! The victim didn't get wet or have an orgasm--she was in real pain. Good job!! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2006)
- Thank you very much, hca. Yeah, my stories are cheesy the way they are, trying to tie in some 'erotic arousal' on the part of the victim would make them unreadable. Besides, most of the readers that bother to get in touch with me seem to prefer it this way - the real deal (or at least a reasonable approximation of it)...
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jip
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Jul 5, 2006 |
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Indeed, no characters, no frills, just simply story.
excellent.... but still curious who was the rapist. He apparently knows his victim very well! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2006)
- Yeah, I bet Donna is asking the same question... But I prefer it this way. Mystery is good. Thank you for your kind words, Jip.
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Widget
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Jul 5, 2006 |
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I don't normally like rape stories but this one was very well written. It was a very concise and intense story. I do suggest that you add in a non consensual code for it though. I gave it a 7 because while again I don't like the subject matter, I did think that it was written in a way that was completely believable. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Jul 5, 2006)
- Thanks, Widget. Actually, it probably was not THAT believable but it's not totally goofy either. I am a bit confused about your suggestion since the codes are: M/f bondage real nc Heavy, as copied and pasted from the story description page. Thanks again for reading and reviewing this.
- Replied by:
Widget
(Edit) (Jul 5, 2006)
- my bad I didn't see the nc haha
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