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Kidnapped and Collared
Author: girlnextdoor
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(Added on Jun 29, 2006)
(This month 14906 readers) (Total 33861 readers) |
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A young girl is kidnapped and is forced to wed a wealthy arabian mining heir. |
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Jul 23, 2006 |
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It was brutally short. Drawing out the look and feel of the chastity belt, the other student's reactions, etc may have made a better story. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Johnspr
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Jul 3, 2006 |
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It was wrote well. Good story and to be continued.Keep up the work. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jun 29, 2006 |
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It is a tired theme, but perhaps you will perk it up in the next chapter. You might also want to learn the value of an "'" when you put an "s" on the end of a person's name.
Oh...aircraft on the football field? I actually laughed out loud! I hope you meant a helicopter! Either way -- so much for homeland security!!! LOL (5/10)
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