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The Belly Riders.
Author: Gypsy
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(Added on Jun 26, 2006)
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The winner of the Belly Riding Race on the island of ponies returns with her daughters for more exciting erotic riding. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
claritydoc
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Mar 8, 2012 |
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Very erotic showing a woman's desire to be penetrated to the limit! (9/10)
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mkemse
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very consistant (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Jul 13, 2006 |
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I was happy to see the return of this story! The sad part for me is, just two chapters.
Gypsy, you did a great job writing this story. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Gypsy
(Edit) (Jul 13, 2006)
- Lad toya, I am happy that you like the story. Many thanks for your kind review. I have been kicking the idea around for another chapter, and if and when I get a good plot, I will add it. I will try to please you and the rest of my readers because I do want you to enjoy these fantasies.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jul 4, 2006 |
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A hot story from any angle. Some serious problems with spellcheck errors: A small unit of time is a minute, not a minuet; that is a dance. A title of respect for a woman is Ma'am, not mama.
Looking forward to more! Well done. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Gypsy
(Edit) (Jul 4, 2006)
- I thank you for your review. Yes you are right. the spell checker miss the meaning of the word and I didn't go back to proof read it after three times. I really was in doubt about Ma'am. I tried to find it in the dictionary but no luck. Thanks for the correction.
May you soar above the clouds with the sun at your back and a kind thermal to keep you there on your peaceful flight.
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| Reviewer:
sherri
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Jul 1, 2006 |
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wow the horse thing never really did anything for me but this story makes me want to be in it! Thanx (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Gypsy
(Edit) (Jul 1, 2006)
- Sherri, I thank you for your high review of my story. With readers like you it makes the time I spend writting worth while to me. I hope you like the follow up to this one coming soon.
May you have gentle winds and following seas with the dolphins playing under your bow on all of your travels.
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jip
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Jun 27, 2006 |
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Great special and sexy story. Something else!
Only one small detail: Brasil is southern hemisphere and nowember is in the summer not the winter! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Gypsy
(Edit) (Jun 28, 2006)
- Jip, the small detail was implied when the girls said that they didn't want to spend the winter in Virginia. Of course the average reader that has studied the world would know that the seasons are reversed south of the Equator and I made it clear that the island was only twenty miles off the coast of Brazil. I don't think your comment is valid in this case. The eleventh month of the year is spelled November, not "nowember" so you see we all are prone to making mistakes. Anyway, I do thank you for your high rating and reading my work. I will be careful in the next story to make it clear that when it is winter in North America it is
summer in South America. Again Many Thanks and may you have fair winds and following seas on all of your journeys. Gypsy
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