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Seven Swats Game
Author: Wolffie
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(Added on Jun 10, 2006)
(This month 9568 readers) (Total 18828 readers) |
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After a tennis match she is rewarded with a spanking. She has a problem with expressing her gratitude and gets into trouble. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 26, 2010 |
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"Natural Born Brat"? A guy named Wolf? Seems that someone has a fondness for Mr. Quentin Tarantino.
A good thing also our Goddess of Victory doesn't play baseball, or we would have been without a heroine after two paragraphs.
This short is okay-ish. Writing is good, but the set-up rattles.
"Seven swats Game" was written while the author wore blinkers. Meaning that Wolffie concentrates on what's going on, but not on the surroundings: having a bit of a spanking game in a public place only works when the author conveniently 'forgets' that there's other folk who surely must be present at a tennis court. Especially in the locker room.
Average story.
JJ (7/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Oct 25, 2010)
- This is a story about D.s. spanking, dress up and violent ass fucking in an empty parking lot. It's encapsulated universe type story.
Who cares if there's anybody in the locker room after private late night practice?
Thank you for your review.
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| Reviewer:
subgirl
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Jun 13, 2006 |
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Nice story, but not enough of it...Please add more. Sure wanted to be the lucky girl. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Jun 13, 2006)
- thanks subgirl. The end was left open purposefully. I will tackle 'zeppelin hunt' soon.
But, this story was meant as a single unit and i hope it 'works' that way.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jun 13, 2006 |
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Another Wolffie story that has me adjusting my slacks. Fine story, hot and well told.
I'd have enjoyed being a fly on the wall there... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Jun 13, 2006)
- wow! thank you, Chuck. That blimp is meant to be general 'eye in the sky' - the obsevered need to know about observera - that makes it more yummy.
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Jun 12, 2006 |
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Nice little story about a favorite little brat and her ever patient and instrutive Dom. Still a few grammer glitches but you're getting much better Wolffie. The imagination department was never a problem with you. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Jun 12, 2006)
- Thank you Mad I appreciate you comemnt and rating very much.
Can we asscribe thse 'grammer glitches' to specific style? No....? Then i will have to smooth them out.
Patient? hhhmmm, maybe TOO patiene, i need to consider it.
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Jun 12, 2006 |
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mmmm mmmmm so that's why You watch the tennis? well, it isnt so interesting in my house. can i come over to Yours to watch? well, no, i suppose not. but that was one heck of a story.
respectfully yours blu (9/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Jun 12, 2006)
- Thanks blu. Lessons in tennis WATCHING (and associated activites) can be arrranged ....
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Jun 10, 2006 |
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Seven Swats is smoking hot. Your use of key words were like worm burning groundstrokes, winners every time. There were several aces served to the brat that makes me wish I knew how to play tennis. Let me put it to you this way, the piece scored with me like an overhead smash. Did I tell you I liked it? (10/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Jun 11, 2006)
- WOW a ten for Wolff! Thank you Nikita, you are a peach(bum). Yes I GATHERED you liked it! I admit my knolegde of tennis is limited to watching it on the tube and keeping the score on beatutiful bums of impertient brats!
Thanks again - comment on key words is duly noted.
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