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The Magic of Daphne
Author: Pimpbot1979
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(Added on Jun 10, 2006)
(This month 42128 readers) (Total 67476 readers) |
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World famous female escape artist Daphne\'s continuing adventures with her boyfriend Brad as they put her tight body and ferocious mind to the test. Sometimes with unintended consequences. A multiple chapter serial. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Feb 29, 2008 |
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Can't believe I haven't reviewed this already. Super story, though a few (very few) 'wrong word' type misspellings. As chksng says, this is a fresh idea. This story seriously needs adding to. It's been too long, man! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
MasterMatt
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Nov 14, 2006 |
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Are you going to update this more? Every week I check for updates. Please let me know! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
pimpbot1979
(Edit) (May 28, 2007)
- Just updated it.
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Jul 22, 2006 |
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This is wonderful, I really enjoyed it. I am looking forward to reading more. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Jul 16, 2006 |
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I really enjoyed this story when it was first posted, but forgot to leave a review. Quite the couple, houdini and his trainer. There were a few grammatical bumps here and there, but, not so much that it interfered with the enjoyment of the escapade. Hope there are more planned for the future. (9/10)
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Widget
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Jul 12, 2006 |
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Other than a few places where the changes from first person view to second person view did not seem quite right, this story was wow!! (9/10)
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Widget
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2006)
- oopps I meant to say third person view not second, that is what happens when writing a review before the first cup of coffee is completed. For some reason I can not edit the first on I did.
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jun 21, 2006 |
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Special and interesting. (7/10)
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CaptainBB
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Jun 20, 2006 |
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A rarely followed idea, well written, exciting and full of suspence. Great! (9/10)
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Mad Lews
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Jun 13, 2006 |
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Nicely done, more about bondage than domination or erotica. It gives your two protagonists a unique relationship. That's good, it gives you room to maneuver as you continue this fine tale. You are going to continue right? (9/10)
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chksng19
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Jun 13, 2006 |
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Hey! A fresh idea! How'd that sneak in?
Seriously, a fine tale well told. Your cliffhanger ending makes me want the update today! Great start. (9/10)
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Mandy001
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Jun 12, 2006 |
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I like the concept, oridginal, unlike a lot I have read, with a little work it can be made into a wonderful piece. Congratulations (5/10)
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J's blu
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Jun 12, 2006 |
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MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmm something different! Interesting, tantalising, teasing! please where is the next installment?
blu (8/10)
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kaleun76
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Jun 11, 2006 |
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Original concept, well written, hot
I hope there's more coming, I definitely want to see where this ends up (And what he gets to do to her tonight) (8/10)
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