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Prostate Control School
Author: FantasyMan
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(Added on Jun 7, 2006)
(This month 22290 readers) (Total 54831 readers) |
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Girlfriends bring their unsuspecting boyfriends to a class (or Nurse’s Office for that matter) for a \"Prostate Taming \". |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
rick_oh
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May 26, 2012 |
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One of my favorite themes, but the story felt unfinished. Also, it's written in the present tense, would flow better if it was written in past tense. I'm willing to proofread future stories of yours. (5/10)
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jip
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Jun 20, 2006 |
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Interesting. Suspects he enjoys it a lot?
A little more details and worked out, but it is ok. (7/10)
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abitbent
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Jun 10, 2006 |
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Intersting ideas, but it reads more like a script for a scene, not much of a story. (3/10)
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chksng19
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Jun 8, 2006 |
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Story? This is written more as a "How-to" manual or perhaps a screen play.
There is certainly the seed of a story here, but it needs generation and feeding to make it a little larger and more easily appreciated. (5/10)
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