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Cassie
Author: erotic writers club
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(Added on Jun 6, 2006)
(This month 15911 readers) (Total 32698 readers) |
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A young girl\'s perfect life is shattered when her father leaves for a younger woman and her mother becomes an alcoholic. She is sent to stay with her Anut and Uncle and two cousins, where she is abused and humiliated. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Jun 7, 2006 |
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Very well written. The age and the naivete is a problem, but it is fiction, a fantasy. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ms2bused
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Jun 7, 2006 |
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This is a well written story but personnally I feel it is absolutely too depressing! (2/10)
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- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (Jun 7, 2006)
- I often give low scores because of poor grammar or bad writing, but why would you give a 2 to a story that you admittedly find well-written just because you find it depressing?
- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2007)
- MS2used,
I think you need to review what the purpose of reviews are. Not to pass judgment on your own reactions, but your depression is hardly a fair critique of the writing.
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| Reviewer:
slv_bea
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Jun 7, 2006 |
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your story is very well written, my Master enjoyed it as i did. the forgoing is slow enough and very interesting and exciting. my Master is very interested to read your continuation. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jun 6, 2006 |
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A very well written story. The girl was a bit too young in MHO though. Nevertheless, I am interested to see how you continue it. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 6, 2006 |
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good start, were to from here?? (9/10)
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