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The Job
Author: Dee Driscoll
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(Added on May 18, 2006)
(This month 11962 readers) (Total 21877 readers) |
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Basically, a bunch of thugs rape and humiliate a woman. It\'s my attempt to make a tribute to pulp fiction, comics and gangster cinema. It may not be \'pornographic\' enough for the average reader though, so be warned. But, if gang rape of a helpless, mature woman is your cup of tea, give it a shot. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
sweet_little_slut
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May 18, 2006 |
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Very well done. Porn with a plot. You have skills, and your writing talent is far above everything else I’ve read on this site.
The central character, Grant, had depth and dimension - very rare in smut. His slow and reluctant arousal by what he was witnessing built nicely, and as a reader I was encouraged to questioned his motivations. His final guilt ridden text message was as disturbing as it was desperate, and we know it will only cause Susan even more distress. But ultimately he can only think about his own need for gratification no matter what the consequence.
Thank you. Keep writing.
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (May 19, 2006)
- Holy shit, sweet little slut, thanks. Not just for that (undeserved?) high grade, but also for actually justifying what I was trying/ hoping/ aiming to achieve. I am glad you liked it.
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H Dean
(Edit) (May 19, 2006)
- Dee - don't be so damned bashful. You tell a damned good tale and I intend on reading and reviewing this story as soon as time permits - and when it's quiet. I've been wondering when you would get around to posting another tale or continuing one of your others. I am glad to see you finally got a new one up.
- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (May 19, 2006)
- Dean, thanks for the pat on the back, but, um, we'll see whether you'll find the story enjoyable enough after all...
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 18, 2006 |
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the story wasok, but very hard to read and follow (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (May 18, 2006)
- Thanks for taking the time, mkemse, although I can't say I wouldn't be happy if you'd expand on the subject a little. Why was it so hard to read and follow? Can I do something about it, um, in the future?
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