|
|
|
|
|
Friday Night Spanking
Author: Pita
|
| |
(Added on May 9, 2006)
(This month 10965 readers) (Total 23138 readers) |
| |
I recieve my first real spanking from my Dom on our first scheduled Friday night. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 7 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
14% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
29% |
57% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (9/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (2/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Defiant Submissive
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Aug 29, 2008 |
| |
I loved how Joe constantly made sure that Pita was ok. Even when he wanted to continue, he always put her well-being above his own pleasure. To me, that is the ideal Mf relationship. (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
earthed_angel
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jun 26, 2007 |
| |
I loved the realistic nature of this story. There's obviously a lot of love between Pita and Joe. I actually liked the "flip-flopping" and fluidity of the roles another reviewer didn't care for, since that's sort of the situation I'm in now too. It was very well written also. Well done, Pita, and I'm anxious to read more from you! (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
chattel69
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 10, 2006 |
| |
It was a great story very realistic just a couple of inconsistancies (8/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
His_pita
(Edit) (May 11, 2006)
- Thanks for reading my story chattel69.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
jip
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 10, 2006 |
| |
Excellent description of facts and feelings. Realistic settings. Just a story to enjoy! (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
His_pita
(Edit) (May 10, 2006)
- Thank you jip. I'm so glad you enjoyed my story.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
learningtopleez
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 9, 2006 |
| |
Ahhh pita! Finally we get to hear about you and Your Joe and a night of passion between the two of you now that you are together!!
Beautiful, and very romantic! I love how the two of you love each other! (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
His_pita
(Edit) (May 9, 2006)
- Thank you learningtopleez!Telling a story about my Joe and our relationship was the easiest story I have ever written because it was full of the love and joy that lives in my heart. I am so glad you enjoyed it. ~pita
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 9, 2006 |
| |
Realy good romantic tale of a couple very much in love. The characters were believable and the settings realistic. So why only 8/10? I found the flipping backwards and forwards between reluctance and submission offputting. Whilst the overcoming of reluctance is the nub of the tail I felt that it tended to lose it's flow. Similarly the couple seemed to slip in and out of role too easily. Whilst this maybe 'real' in the strict sense of the word I found it disconcerting.
Enough with the bitching! I do love your work and the 'Daddy' bits were great! Please keep writing. (8/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
His_pita
(Edit) (May 9, 2006)
- Thank you for reading my story Lisa. I can see why it would seem I did do a lot of flipping between ruluctance and submission. The story was more based on reality then a role we play. I am afterall a brand new sub living with her Dom and learning how to submit to his will. Thanks again. ~pita
|
|
|
About 