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Diversion
Author: AlwaysCocked
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(Added on Apr 28, 2006)
(This month 36084 readers) (Total 58791 readers) |
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Diversion is set in the same alternate reality as my previous two stories, Annual Inspection and Retirement. It is a stand-alone story-- however, reading the other two, as they feature some of the same characters and reference previous events, will help. Diversion is set in a world with human dairy cows--if this doesn\'t interest you, you probably won\'t enjoy the story. It is heavy on fetish and light on sex. I have subdivided it into 5 parts, because it turned out to be 24,000 words total. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
ozzystoy
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May 31, 2006 |
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As a male practicing vacuum pumping and body mods, this story is HOT. It was great to be able to place yourself in the character's place. A very entertaining story, especially the way it ends. Gotta love genital vacuum modifications. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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May 17, 2006 |
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A well executed tale. Excellent flow and character development. Any technical issues were minor and not worth noting. The short synapsis provided by the author was quite sufficient in explaining the "alternate reality" in which the story takes place. As the story is incomplete, so is my review. At this point, I am looking forward to reading on and improving my number rating.
**Edit: As of the 5/17 two more chapters have been added. I must add that, despite a lack of enthusiasm for the story's main fetish, I find this tale to be quite a compelling read. Really, it's getting better as it goes. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 30, 2006 |
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Looking forward to reading more (8/10)
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