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The Penalty Box
Author: Tyjord
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(Added on Apr 24, 2006)
(This month 35134 readers) (Total 53027 readers) |
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A night in the life of a young couple in love. He\'s an up and coming sports star. She\'s a wealthy business woman...and extrememly dominant. How far will she take him? How far will he go? |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
cbtboyuk
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May 29, 2010 |
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i've defintiely reviewed this story before, but as that review seems to have gone...i must say agin how extraordinary i think this storyt is. Beautifully written, utterly seductive, hot and horny. Turns from a relatively domestic scene to a truly amazing nightmare...Josh is doomed! How will he survive with his sanity intact? gorgeous, gorgeous stuff, and your writing style is lovely- lean lucid and evocative. i am eager for more lithe boys in hideous bondage and cruel chsitity. Thanks (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
slvWriting
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May 10, 2007 |
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Another extremely nice story from Tyjord. Original, erotic and very good indeed. Well done (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Apr 27, 2006 |
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great story concept. More please (9/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (May 2, 2006)
- Thank You!
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| Reviewer:
Anneya
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Apr 25, 2006 |
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This is very good, I enjoyed every word. I hope you will add more soon. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (May 2, 2006)
- I'm glad you liked it!
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abitbent
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Apr 25, 2006 |
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This is a fantastic story. It's not overburdened with descriptions of non-realistic play. The characters develop well and now after reading these two chapters, I'm dying to see where Josh and Alexandra's relationship will take them. Innocently erotic. If it's the psychological dynamic of a D/s relationship that turns you on, more than the redundant descriptions of "Yes Ma'am may i have another", this story is for you. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (May 2, 2006)
- Thank you for taking the time to write this great review. Thanks also for the perfect 10! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I tried a more emotional track with this one, and I'm glad to see it worked out for the readers.
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adeadeasyone
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Apr 25, 2006 |
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More chapters please (9/10)
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tyjord
(Edit) (May 2, 2006)
- Maybe someday, when I think of a good idea.
Thanks for the review!
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Apr 25, 2006 |
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Nice femdom story. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (May 2, 2006)
- Thanks!
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