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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Nov 14, 2008 |
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a very enjoyable read (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Apr 8, 2007 |
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Poor Victoria! An extremely ugly story with hints of racism as well as of extreme sexism. I don't know how much it will turn anyone on, but it certainly lives up to its codes. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Apr 24, 2006 |
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Not a bad story. Needs a little zip, though; more suspense, something. The viewing of the other woman in chapter 2 took too long to say what she didn't want to see; more descriptive language would raise the score.
Looking forward to part three. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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{{{covering my eyes with one hand and cupping my clit with the other}}} that poor poor girl! The only problem I found was that you need to get all your tenses together--you talk in the present in some places, and the past in others. On the plus side, this story certain held my attention!!! (7/10)
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- Replied by:
T Bone Steak
(Edit) (Apr 8, 2006)
- I'll look more into it. Thank you for the review.
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