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My life as a dog slave
Author: Anja Laubker
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(Added on Mar 31, 2006)
(This month 54591 readers) (Total 107631 readers) |
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Thw way of a young girl to total submission and 24/7 slavery - her life as the dog of a Nubian princess |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
himind
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Jan 21, 2007 |
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Has a very good premise.Wonder why the author lost interest? (8/10)
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robyn
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Jul 23, 2006 |
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can't wait for more (7/10)
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slavegirl2006
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Apr 12, 2006 |
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I don't care what anyone says here. I got the point to your story and it was perfect! Don't worry about your grammer or English spelling. To me, that is not what counts... What counts is how excited i can get when i read a story like yours. I can't wait to read the rest! Hurry!!!! :-) (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Apr 5, 2006 |
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Don't let poor reviews hold you back from posting new chapters, Anja Laubker!
I thouroughly enjoyed this first installment and very much liked the general idea.
Of course, there is room for improving the grammar, but that is something that will come along as you continue writing...
Looking forward to future chapters.
JJ (8/10)
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peachy
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Apr 3, 2006 |
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Really worth reading.
And wish I could rate it higher but then I wont be fair ;)
, keep it up
And thanks for posting your work here (8/10)
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jip
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Apr 3, 2006 |
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Good start. Looking forward for the next part. (8/10)
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geoff
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Apr 3, 2006 |
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Get an editor. Writing in English requires an understanding of sentence structure in that language. (2/10)
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- Replied by:
jip
(Edit) (Apr 3, 2006)
- What bothers me is that a small minority of English speaking reviewers behave as “superior people” spelling the lessons to the “barbarians that spoil the language”, while most of them probably do not speak a single word of a foreign language! Most of the writers simply write a story for the story or for the pleasure to do it and write in a kind of “non-perfect” International English.
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JimmyJump
(Edit) (Apr 5, 2006)
- The "Schoolmaster Type" has struck again... Though it is only just to point out faulty grammar or shabby construction of sentences, at least half of the purpose of a review is to 'judge' the quality of the content. Not how that content is executed.
Just my two Eurocents...
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| Reviewer:
Von Schmiser
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Apr 1, 2006 |
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Very good start..I enjoyed it very much..Apart from the small criticisms, quite nice. I eagerly await further episodes. (8/10)
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bigcat
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Apr 1, 2006 |
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I agree with Sheliagirl below. Good premise and start -- and there's an exotic dash to the insecurity in the use of language. Don't be stopped, Anja. Continue on. You have your fans. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 1, 2006 |
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I think everyone as stated what was wrong. The idea is sound, with a good start. Help with grammer will get you higher ratings and a better story for the readers. (5/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Apr 1, 2006 |
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The plot of the story is a ggood plot. However, the author could use a proof reader. It is abvious that English is a second language and a proof reader could help fix the small grammatical and spelling mistakes. (5/10)
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sheilagirl
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Apr 1, 2006 |
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I loved reading this. I love humiliation feelings and experiences from a Mistress. I want more. I don't care if you are not a native English speaker/writer. I get the point just fine. In fact it adds a special flavor to the story. I can picture you narrating it with a cute foreign accent. (8/10)
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H Dean
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Apr 1, 2006 |
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The harsh rating I have given this story is strictly for the poor English. It is clear that you are writing in a language not your own and I would recomend finding an editor before future chapters are posted. Also, an edit and re-submission of the first chapter is highly recomended. Should you manage to do as suggested I can see a rather entertaining story. Frankly, I liked how the story began and would very much like to see how it progresses. Please continue on with this tale - do seek an editor and do not hurry in completing it. I would not want to see a good story go to waste due to hasty construction. (3/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Mar 31, 2006 |
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It is obvious that English is not your first language, so I won't be as mean as I could be. But, you need to at least run "spell check" on your work before you submit it. There were numerous words that would have been corrected with it. I am curious to see how you continue this story. (6/10)
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gentleman
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Mar 31, 2006 |
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Good set of rules, good start. I want lots more! (8/10)
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