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The Story
Author: Laleldil
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(Added on Mar 30, 2006)
(This month 31495 readers) (Total 68681 readers) |
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Bob\'s long hidden desire to be dominated is fullfilled much further than he had wanted. |
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Apr 6, 2006 |
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One hot story. Drawn out and teasing, just like the action itself. Look forward to more. Well done. (9/10)
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just4you11
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Apr 4, 2006 |
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1st chapter was very good. Dejaview.?.
well done
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underherthumb
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Apr 2, 2006 |
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Damn. This could have been my story at the start,(i TOO told my wife/mistress that her beginnings at dominance was just "all right" and I remember the first time she hit me in the balls - only problem was when I screamed, she stopped whipping and started crying - I have often wondered and fantasized what might have happened if she had gotten off on my screams!) The only problem I had was the confusion due to flashbacks. Maybe just one flashback would have been better. it just interrrupted the pacing of a VERY hot story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Von Schmiser
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Apr 2, 2006 |
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Excellent story. One of my favorite subjects..tease and denial, Of Both sexes. I liked it. (8/10)
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jip
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Mar 31, 2006 |
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Good story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Mar 30, 2006 |
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Very hot story great plot and well told. (7/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Mar 30, 2006 |
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I found this to be a very hot story. I would have given it a higher score, except for your typos. Clean them up on the next chapter and I will raise your score. (7/10)
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