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Sucker Mom
Author: Teacher
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(Added on Mar 29, 2006)
(This month 12620 readers) (Total 33046 readers) |
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What happens when suburban housewives find their community service is as sex objects at the local high school. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (7/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
MIKEY100
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Mar 30, 2006 |
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The premise is great, but it needs to be drawn out more. You use one sentence where it could have been a paragraph. The part with the neighbor boy had a lot of potential. Give more details. Describe the women more. Keep going. (5/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 29, 2006 |
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great start can't wait for more to bad this doesn't happen in real ife...or does it (9/10)
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