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Controlled
Author: Aussiegirl
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(Added on Mar 21, 2006)
(This month 42003 readers) (Total 63041 readers) |
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When Pete sees Julie in a brothel one night, he senses that she is not there of her own free will. He makes up his mind to help her and finds himself in a world he never imagined existed |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 25, 2010 |
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Extremely well written story, which gets a max score from yours truly, not in the least thanks to the expert handling of the split views. It's not always easy to do such a style, because writers tend to make the different views too much alike. Here, in "Controlled" you clearly sense the actual personalities behind the narrative.
The story itself is also very refreshing, in the sense that we are being presented with a 'real' story, as opposed to a shagfest woven to a plaid with the help of non-shag interludes.
Great storytelling with a keen eye for detail make this one of the better reads in the genre.
Well done Aussiegirl...
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 6, 2008 |
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you have realy cum into your own as a writer (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Mar 27, 2006 |
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This story was great. This is one of those stories, when it comes to rating is hard. Is it a 9 or a 10? Eith way it is a great story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (Mar 28, 2006)
- Thanks La Toya,
I know what you mean about deciding on a rating, it is really hard sometimes. I consider a 9 a fantastic score anyway, so thank you.
Hope you keep on reading and voting stories.
Aussiegirl
- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (Mar 28, 2006)
- Thanks La Toya,
I know what you mean about deciding on a rating, it is really hard sometimes. I consider a 9 a fantastic score anyway, so thank you.
Hope you keep on reading and voting stories.
Aussiegirl
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| Reviewer:
mr_slogan
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Mar 27, 2006 |
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Very well written. I didn't lie the spilt view style. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
new_kitten
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Mar 23, 2006 |
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Well written (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (Mar 23, 2006)
- Thanks new kitten,
I am glad you liked the story and took the time to review. I really do appreciate it.
Aussiegirl
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 22, 2006 |
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Good story Aussiegirl. The different views are quite interesting. Scenario is good. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2006)
- Thanks Jip,
I'm glad you liked the story and the different views. I am always relieved when the first review comes in, so thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Aussiegirl
- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2006)
- Thanks Jip,
I'm glad you liked the story and the different views. I am always relieved when the first review comes in, so thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Aussiegirl
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