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The Ornament
Author: Master Matthew
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(Added on Mar 20, 2006)
(This month 13578 readers) (Total 24545 readers) |
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Julie is used as an ornament at a party |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
slavegirl2006
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Apr 1, 2006 |
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Wow, what a fantastic story. You leave me waiting for more and my imagination running wild. i really can't wait to read more. Great writing! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
MasterMatthew
(Edit) (Apr 1, 2006)
- Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. There will be more of the character, if not exactly of this story. Thanks for taking the time. Any concepts ou would like to see explored in future stories?
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| Reviewer:
Aussiegirl1
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Mar 22, 2006 |
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I really found your story interesting and very well written. I liked the way you allowed the reader to experience what Julie was feeling. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Aussiegirl (9/10)
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- Replied by:
MasterMatthew
(Edit) (Mar 23, 2006)
- Hi Aussie Girl,
Thanks for the review. You are the first female (I assume) to review one of my stories so I am very pleased you enjoyed it.
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Mar 21, 2006 |
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First a compliment/critisism: This story was told well enough to overcome the few technical errors that were present: loose for lose and a strange word "automones", to name a few. Now, on to the guts of my review: This is a well written story, atypical of erotic writings - or what I have read - in that it was written by a man with (I assume) the female reader in consideration. Quite well done and rather refreshing. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
MasterMatthew
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2006)
- Thanks for the review. What I am interested in BDSM is generally what is going on in my submissives mind, so I tend to write stories that show what I hope is going on. So it is not so much that I have the female reader in mind - not that I specifically don't - but that as in my bdsm life generally; my focus is the female. Sorry for the technical errors.
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H Dean
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2006)
- Matthew, you did quite well and I do look forward to more offerings from your "pen". As for the technical errors: I wouldn't have commented on them except, as a contributing author, I like to know my own faults. Keep up the good work.
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oldwino
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Mar 21, 2006 |
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very well written. i know several women who will love it. my gf will want to copy it. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
MasterMatthew
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2006)
- Thanks for the review. If you know people who would like to have their ideas turned into stories let me know :)
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jip
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Mar 21, 2006 |
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Very special story. Good description of Julie's mind. Believe that being exposed as such should have been a pure exitement for her. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
MasterMatthew
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2006)
- Thanks jip, I'm pleased you enjoyed this one more than the previous one.
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J's blu
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Mar 21, 2006 |
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well written story, good language use, descriptive, enough character development to make them real. i will add it to my personal fantasies. :D
respectfully blu (8/10)
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- Replied by:
MasterMatthew
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2006)
- Thanks! Its great when people enjoy our stories.
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