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Linda\'s Denial
Author: Brosco
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(Added on Mar 17, 2006)
(This month 29954 readers) (Total 58476 readers) |
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Locked in a chastity belt for 2 weeks, Linda is desperate to cum |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 25, 2010 |
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While well written, this is not a story. It's a short piece wherein the writer introduces us to a woman who likes self-bondage. Point. No characterization worth mentioning, nor a deeper, better view on the woman's surroundings. On top of this, the story never was continued. Too bad...
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Koli22
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May 30, 2008 |
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love this story (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Deathnote
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Nov 10, 2007 |
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Nicely done! ^_^ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Bridger15
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Aug 14, 2006 |
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Great story! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
tkm
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Aug 13, 2006 |
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Wonderful story! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Mar 19, 2006 |
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I think it was a wonderful story that captured the anticipation, and the eagerness of the tease. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Brosco
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2006)
- bracemaiden: I truly thank you for your comment, but look at it this way: I am a newbie writer and appreciate any feedback. To get 8's and 9's astounded me. Ever to get a 7 was amazing - to get a 7 from someone that admitted it wasn't even his kink ... shhhheeezzz... I must be doing something right :)
I truly thank all for the feedback and it has encouraged me to write more.
Brosco
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 18, 2006 |
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Good story, although I'm not in "chasty belts" stuff. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
bracemaiden
(Edit) (Mar 19, 2006)
- Penalizing the writer for a kink called out in the key codes doesn't seem quite fair. . .
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jip
(Edit) (Mar 20, 2006)
- Braicemaiden, I really do not understand what or where you refer to????
I quote how I like the story for the story and not for other items.
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Mar 17, 2006 |
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Orgasm denial is a favorite theme of mine. This
is nicely done, but I wish it could have been
longer. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Mar 17, 2006 |
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Great, but unfortunately not in size! *wink* (9/10)
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