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Weighed
Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (4/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 4, 2006 |
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and this is generous, terrible layout, the story is bad to fair at best, the whole story needs major work (3/10)
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castle2001
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Mar 17, 2006 |
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An excellent premise. The transposition into english is not adequate. It took courage (or foolishness) for a non english speaking writer to submit to this site. The editor of this site also could have higher standards so as to avoid embarassing the author.
I hope another author takes on the issue of the islamofascists treatment of female infidels. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
sonyaesperanto_15
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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It was a very nice story. Some BALLS to really put this into writing. Keep up the good work, Jens Jensen. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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Not sure if English may not be your native tongue. If so, it would help to get an English-speaking editor. Many wrong words, wrong parts of speech, etc., not due to a spell checker. Perhaps the translation program was poor.
If English IS your first language, the story needs much work on getting it correctly spelled, etc.
The story itself was OK. (2/10)
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