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Quarry Labor
Author: David l
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(Added on Mar 11, 2006)
(This month 67195 readers) (Total 83200 readers) |
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A beautiful white woman is unjustly sentenced to field labor in a remote island country. She was framed by her ambassador to the country for not responding to her lesbian advances. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
texswim
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Mar 18, 2006 |
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A very creative and heavy story. Love all the different punishements. Would like more detail and more of the slaves feelings expressed. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
maitre
(Edit) (Mar 19, 2006)
- Thank you for the excellent rating. The first part of this text was developed by the artist ARIES for BDSMARTWOK. I believe he titled it PUNISHMENT ISLAND. He brought to life what I was trying to decribe. He did an excellent job but then I lost track of him when he discontinued working with BDSMARTWORK. He only addressed the first few episodes.
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chksng19
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Mar 13, 2006 |
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Pushes a few limits of believability. But taking suspension of disbelief into consideration, not a bad story. I would think there would be more usage of her other than by the horse... now she is so stretched, she will be useless. (7/10)
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jip
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Mar 13, 2006 |
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Lacks reality. A serie of incredible brutalities that in rl nobody could survive. (4/10)
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Engineer
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Mar 12, 2006 |
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A standard motto implemented with a assortment of standard tortures and cruelties, described in a very straight-forward language without erotic flavour. (4/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 12, 2006 |
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the story was god altho i am not into animals,
and as kemosbe said, how she stayed alive is a wonder in itself, what i di like about the story was the flow, the detail and the descriptoin of the pain and her tasks i only wish your chapters were longer would have made i easier to read (8/10)
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kemosabe
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Mar 12, 2006 |
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Wow! How Q78987 ever stays alive is a miracle! Whip, whip, whip! Sure wish I could have known more about her than just a number. And the horse! Most horses have penises that would have ruptured her insides, but not our protagonist!
The ambassador must have really been pissed. (5/10)
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