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A New Punishment for Susan
Author: Mr. Mumei
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(Added on Jul 9, 2001)
(This month 77259 readers) (Total 159449 readers) |
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14 year old Susan was used to her step father's evil shenanigans. She knew what torment he was capable of. But she never expected *this*... |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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kleintje15
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Aug 2, 2004 |
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well i have read better and i have read worse and it seemed like the writer had more to say (6/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 26, 2004 |
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real good story, please add more desicription to the humiliation part, but despite this it is a good story, my type of reading :) (8/10)
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littleslut
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Jun 18, 2004 |
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the story starts well but get's weaker as it goes on not but the humilation aspect's of the story were well written all though altogether not very convincing (5/10)
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BDSM_Tourguide
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Jan 11, 2004 |
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Good story. I like the humiliating aspects of it. I would have liked more description though. (6/10)
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ladys_maid
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May 26, 2003 |
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This really reads to me like a shopping list of punishments. The storyline is not particularly original and the writing is not very well detailed (especially for a good length story like this). It's main problem, though, is that there are just too many implausibles to make it a believeable read. Fundamentally, it is an exciting story, but it's well overdone. (4/10)
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ponytara
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Mar 18, 2002 |
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it's a full-on story, perhaps a little too extreme for my liking. i suspect it's better to over-do the torture though, thus letting readers skim passages that surpass their desires, whereas too little would be unsatisfying for all. (8/10)
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jaz
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Jan 27, 2002 |
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Good story (8/10)
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zkay
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Jan 10, 2002 |
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good story, could be extended with more detail (7/10)
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Stefanie
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Jan 6, 2002 |
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very hot story, it gave me a lot of satisfaction :) ;) (9/10)
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watcher69
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Oct 12, 2001 |
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Not Enough Detail! There should definetly be more information on each encounter. Another Great concept and good direction but elaborate more. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
mikeg2
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Sep 15, 2001 |
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great (6/10)
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SecretWorld
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Aug 30, 2001 |
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Crazy and extreme, by which I mean absurd. Which is the way I usually like sex stories. Believability is for the dull. 'Susan' is like the little match girl, but nobody is gonna cry, they're gonna wank! (9/10)
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Guillaume777
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Jul 16, 2001 |
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A good story until Susan and Kim switch place. (7/10)
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