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Hayden Mansion (aka Dungeon)
Author: Amasterfound
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(Added on Mar 6, 2006)
(This month 14389 readers) (Total 31167 readers) |
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A secretary is caught \"borrowing\" petty cash from her boss, who discovers it and gives her an ultimatum: go to jail or be punished. This is the story of how she became enslaved. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Mar 11, 2006 |
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It is hot and pretty well written wank story. It is the standard bdsm theme, however, when you start a story with all that hot action in the first chapter, I'm going to stay tuned to see where it goes next. KEEP IT UP RED. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
redhot33
(Edit) (Mar 11, 2006)
- Thank you. I will keep it going. At first I had doubts as to whether I would continue it or not, but siunce I have it on 3 different sites and everyone wants more I will continue it!
- Replied by:
redhot33
(Edit) (Mar 11, 2006)
- Thank you. I will keep it going. At first I had doubts as to whether I would continue it or not, but siunce I have it on 3 different sites and everyone wants more I will continue it!
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| Reviewer:
SEVERUSMAX
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Mar 7, 2006 |
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Very excellent work, my love. Hope to see MUCH more of it. Especially more punishment and anal sex! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
redhot33
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2006)
- Thank you Master for your review!
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Mar 7, 2006 |
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While agree with Chksng19 about the caps, This is a great start to the story. I llok forward to more. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
redhot33
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2006)
- Thank you. I too agreee about the caps. Just forgot to edit them before sending it in.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Mar 7, 2006 |
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I'd like to see a whole lot less use of CAPS for emphasis. It is distracting.
The story is an old tale; you've made a good start at adding fresh twists and turns. Looking forward to seeing where you go with it. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
redhot33
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2006)
- Thank you for your review! And I agree with the Caps I forgot to edit them out before sending it in.
- Replied by:
redhot33
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2006)
- Thank you for your review! And I agree with the Caps I forgot to edit them out before sending it in.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 6, 2006 |
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what a start it can only get better plus i loved the rules detaield as they are hope you add more real soon, can't wait (10/10)
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