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Thrilling Rape Fantasies 2
Author: teamster
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(Added on Feb 28, 2006)
(This month 35236 readers) (Total 85289 readers) |
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the continuing adventures of young Alison. her skanky roommate Fiona gets her comeuppance in later chapters |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Apr 5, 2006 |
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I really enjoyed this story. However, as with your first installment, I feel that with a little more time this could be substancially better. Frankly, a few edits, maybe by an outside source, would serve this story very well. Also, I am not fond of the first person omnicient voice. I have never seen it work, always hindering otherwise solid works. Just the same, as I said with the first installement of your story, I wish I could give seperate rating numbers for the differing aspects of your story. If I could, it would get a "6" for technical failures and a "9" for the story.
**Story chapters were repeated several times, making it difficult to read. You may want to contact Rabbit to get the formatting problem resolved. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
rubberwhore
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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First, thank you for continuing this story/series. It has been on of my favorites since I read it a good while back. I've always had a major fetish for mind control and total control. The idea's hit me so much, My mistress started looking into "thinks" (10/10)
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- Replied by:
teamster
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2006)
- thanks for the glowing review. i have had this story more or less in the can for a while but it's a good deal of work to retype and edit it so i had to take a break for a whle. there's lots more coming. as i have said in some of my own reviews of other people's stories it's what the characters feel and think that gives a story life... otherwise it's just a dry recitation of events.
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mkemse
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Feb 28, 2006 |
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the story was a bit short, the larget print did not help, i wsh you had more lenth to it and more story but it was enjoyable to read none the less (7/10)
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