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Zara: Pierced and Branded Slave
Author: MrBondskin
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(Added on Jul 1, 2001)
(This month 128630 readers) (Total 184370 readers) |
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Struggling but proud starlet refuses to sleep with a producer on the casting couch. He rewards her refusal by enslaving her. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
TannerHyde
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Jul 24, 2016 |
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Enjoyed the imaginative and degrading cruelty. Could use some editing for clarity and to make it flow easier, but I understood clearly enough the good stuff that went down. I would have liked a little more personality and character, to get a sense of what was being destroyed. Action was a little bit connect-the-dots convenient, like there was a chosen path and whatever was needed to make that happen was what happened, rather than letting things flow from actual character choices (example: might have made more sense if she had tried to beg him to fuck her when it started getting bad, even if disingenuously, to get out of it, rather than just getting stubborn). But still, quite hot. (7/10)
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krystal
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Nov 28, 2010 |
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LOVED the content and story line. I just pray that (10/10)
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tbear4759
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May 13, 2007 |
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author should have proof-read the story-----Her pleading didn't stop his advances. She heard the click of metal and looked
down to see him rub his fingers along his cunt lips.
this guy has cunt lips???????? (5/10)
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diem
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Oct 2, 2004 |
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great start. What happens next? (8/10)
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Icarium
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Dec 5, 2003 |
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Real nice, too bad it seems unfinished. (9/10)
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quickfix9
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Oct 30, 2003 |
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A good story that keeps you guessing what else will happen to the subject.
(8/10)
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barichardsuk
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May 15, 2003 |
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Fantastic story, wish you could write some more parts to the story. (9/10)
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johnsteel
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Oct 17, 2002 |
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extremely scary :-) (10/10)
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hitman9710
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Feb 7, 2002 |
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I enjoyed this story. Good plot, not enough description of the rapes though. (5/10)
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eperdu
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Jul 30, 2001 |
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Can't wait to find out the rest of the story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Topaz1246
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Jul 9, 2001 |
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The story kept you mesmorized, always wanting more. The words drew you in to the story. You could feel Zara's fear, pain and resignation. It also let you wanting to know what is next in Zara's adventure. (10/10)
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