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April O Neil - SHREDDER’S SLAVE
Author: Sonya Esperanto
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(Added on Feb 20, 2006)
(This month 17910 readers) (Total 24719 readers) |
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April O Neil is captured by Shredder and ends up as his slave. Shredder is the main villain from the hit comic book and animated t.v. series TEENAGE MUTANT NINJA TURTLES. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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Ok, enough of the fantasy stories. They are poorly written and just taking up space. THEY ARE ALL THE SAME!!! (1/10)
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petleah
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Feb 21, 2006 |
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While the characters are major players in any story, this left a lot to be desired in the plot and overall flow of the events. Every sentence was choppy; jumping from one scene to the next, leaving no time for the reader to settle in. It could be much better if muscles, nerves, brains, and flesh were added these bare bones. (5/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 20, 2006 |
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i have always had a issue withthose authors who take cartoon characters and try to make the erotic, most of the time it simply does not work well (6/10)
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- Replied by:
sonyaesperanto_15
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2006)
- To you, they don't work. To many others, they do work.
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