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The Letter
Author: Wistan
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(Added on Feb 20, 2006)
(This month 20324 readers) (Total 37913 readers) |
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An evening in the life of a husband and his dominant wife. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bullfinch
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Jun 8, 2008 |
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well written. good story. more please (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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May 6, 2008 |
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Well there is only torture and no sex in this piece. Also why doesn't he leave her or overpower her? It's not very believable. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
wistan
(Edit) (May 6, 2008)
- No, no sex here. No need for it, IMHO.
As for why he doesn't leave her... he loves her.
But I'm glad you at least enjoyed it to the extent of 4 out of 10! :-)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 22, 2006 |
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the nice thing about fantasy writing is that it always you to enjoy the story and not reflect on a posible reality of it, altho i am sure there are situations like this in rl (9/10)
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portionofmyself
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Feb 21, 2006 |
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Excellent story and well written. Please continue to write such imaginative stories! i found the whole nettle torture to be very original and devious! As for me ... i would marry this woman in a heartbeat! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Wistan
(Edit) (Mar 5, 2006)
- Thanks for the high score and the feedback! The idea for the nettles came from an article I found about how children were punished in Victorian England, apparently application of nettles was a common punishment back then - that's also what gave me the idea of making the wife so interested in that era. So who knows, maybe there really are people who live like that even today!
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foxeye1
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Feb 21, 2006 |
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Nice story with plenty of detail and one which flows well. Always nice to read of a cock being punished! Thank you and well done. Any more to follow? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Wistan
(Edit) (Mar 5, 2006)
- Thanks. I have another story on the library, "Satisfying Stephanie". It's a longer, more detailed and character-driven femdom story. I'd love to have more votes/feedback on that one!
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jip
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Feb 21, 2006 |
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Action story. I don't know if I would like to be married to this women. In fact I would not! however the story itself is short but exiting. Good luck poor man (7/10)
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