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Card Sharp
Author: Some Writer
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(Added on Feb 11, 2006)
(This month 32519 readers) (Total 70062 readers) |
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A girl agrees to set up a game of strip cards between her ex-boyfriend and the girl he fancies. But the cards are fixed... |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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nasferi
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Apr 30, 2011 |
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nice story write some more (9/10)
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ElectricBadger
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Apr 26, 2007 |
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I thought it was great, really good work and a terrific job of building up situations. I hope you'll be inspired to write more some day! (10/10)
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slvWriting
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Nov 20, 2006 |
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Good story, very erotic. It has some errors though, misplacing things and toys. Like when he is to put "ankle and leg cuffs" and later it turns out he has ankle and wrist cuffs, which makes much more sense. Or even when he removes a gag which he has never been made to wear... instead he was wearing a blindfold (which I guess it was what he really is to remove) (8/10)
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ascot8111
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Apr 8, 2006 |
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The anticipation-building was perfect. The only thing I'd change is the part where George is finally made to come. It was slightly anti-climatic (excuse the pun). Thanks for the story, Some Writer. (9/10)
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bracemaiden
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Feb 17, 2006 |
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A wonderful tease! All the right hints of all the right stuff. (9/10)
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bdsmbill
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Feb 15, 2006 |
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Good story. Short but well done. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 15, 2006 |
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nice job (9/10)
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gerund
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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Enjoyed it -- well written, didn't give it all away too early. Thanks! (9/10)
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jip
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Feb 13, 2006 |
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erotic story. The poor guy will have to masturbate... (8/10)
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bigcat
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Feb 12, 2006 |
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That is one terific short erotic story. Very well done. Great tension. (10/10)
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DungeonMaster6
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Feb 12, 2006 |
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Loved this, looking forward to the next chapter (9/10)
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benstrap
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Feb 12, 2006 |
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Great story, very sexy and humiliating/ A real turn on. Can't wait for the next chapter. (9/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Feb 12, 2006 |
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It was alright did not do much for me. (7/10)
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