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A Mind\'s Eye
Author: Deputy Duffy
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(Added on Feb 9, 2006)
(This month 10240 readers) (Total 20805 readers) |
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What is it like to be strip searched. Told through a woman\'s eyes. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
laursie
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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Loved the story. Cant wait to read more of yours. (8/10)
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Aussiegirl1
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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I liked your story very much. The writing style didn't worry me, as I know that you have to write in the style you are comfortable with. Keep up the stories.
Aussiegirl (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Feb 12, 2006 |
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A very good story but I think you might want to try experimenting with writing in the first person. It might be a bit of a challenge to right from the female victim's point of view but it would be smoother and more realistic than an impersonal second person POV (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Feb 10, 2006 |
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That is such a well writeen story. Good one. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Feb 10, 2006 |
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Not a bad story ... just hard to read in the voice you chose. But the girl was crazy to not take it up the butt ... that can always be fun! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 10, 2006 |
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A good story, but somewhat awkward. Second voice stories (You did this, you did that) are EXTREMELY difficult to get all in that one voice; the author tends to slip into others. It happens here a couple times.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 9, 2006 |
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your stories are always hot (9/10)
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