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Jack\'s Submission
Author: Masterinc
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(Added on Feb 6, 2006)
(This month 14971 readers) (Total 35525 readers) |
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The story of how Jack Short became his wife\'s sub and sex toy. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
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Rating: (8/10) |
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 22, 2006 |
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altho i am not into Femdom, nice to see a story from a female point of view rather then a man's just for a cge, i still prefer maledom, but it was a good story (8/10)
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Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Feb 15, 2006 |
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Good story, and the spread leg rail device was diabolical. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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Feb 11, 2006 |
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The concept is excellent and the detailing of the punishments were well thought out. I didn't notice too many typos, although with a story that long, there are bound to be some. The length of the story had me speed reading through some of it, which is probably my only complaint. (9/10)
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