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Shana\'s Initiation
Author: Samantha Vishevsky
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(Added on Jan 23, 2006)
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A naive freshman in college meets up with the guy of her dreams. She doesn\'t quite realize what will be demanded of her...but she will enjoy every minute. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Mar 7, 2011 |
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A good opening chapter. The characterizations are a little light and a perhaps a bit more of Shana's POV might have made the story more intersting.
It has been over five years are we going to get some more? (8/10)
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Aussiegirl
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Jan 29, 2006 |
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I really liked the start of the story, I felt like I was there. I would love to know what happens next, so if you are thinking of adding more chapters, that would be great. You were able to create a real feeling of tension, that made the story flow well. (9/10)
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cambridge
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Jan 25, 2006 |
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An excellent beginning; the pace seems just right. It works from its vanilla aspects in addition to the bdsm. (9/10)
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