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The island
Author: Astrid
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(Added on Jan 17, 2006)
(This month 16253 readers) (Total 34500 readers) |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Jan 30, 2006 |
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It's a good idea for a story, and one used many times before. The is a need for proof reading, reparagraphing. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Jan 22, 2006 |
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A fine idea, although not new - neither the island nor the corrective part. For me, too, the story would benefit from some proofreading to omit the flaws in spelling, grammar and logics.
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| Reviewer:
chooky_104
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Jan 22, 2006 |
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Great story-line. The Author could achieve much better results after some assistance with correct grammar and paragraphing. This aspect caused the plot to be somewhat fractured, but still enjoyable. Don't understand the reference to pics?? Where are they? (6/10)
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